Question

假如你是林凡，得知你的朋友郝強生病住院，需要一大筆錢，導致他心情沉重、郁郁寡歡。請根據一下的提示給寫一封信,給他一些關心和建議。
要點提示： 1. 學會照顧好自己，保持好良好的精神狀態（stay in…）。
2. 多于醫生、朋友談心，從中得到幫助（get help from）。
3. 不要擔心錢，因為我們會幫你籌集錢（raise money）。
4. 有空我會去看你，幫你補補課（help…with…）。
5. 希望你能笑對人生（smile at…）早日健康。
寫作要求：要點齊全,要適當發揮。詞數70個左右。（短文開頭結尾已給出，不計入總詞數）
Dear Hao Qiang,
I am sorry to hear that you are ill in hospital. I understand your feeling very well. But you know nobody can be happy all the time.
Your sincerely,
Lin Fan.

Answer 1

Dear Hao Qiang,
I am sorry to hear that you are ill in hospital. I understand your feeling very well. But you know nobody can be happy all the time. You should learn to take good care of yourself and stay in a good mood. You can talk to the doctors or your friends when you are upset. Try to get help from them.You must follow the doctor’s advice and take the medicine on time. Don’t worry about money because we can raise money for you. My friend and I will visit when we are free. We can help you with your lesson. I hope you can smile at life and get well soon.
Your sincerely,
Lin Fan

試題分析：這是一篇提綱式的給材料作文。要求給生病的朋友一些建議同時表示你的關心。主要用到一般現在時。
【亮點說明】這篇短文不僅注意避免句式重復而且使用了大量的的短語，可見該生英語功底扎實。.如all the time，take good care of， stay in a good mood.等，使文章的表達更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。