Question

學(xué)生會(huì)通知學(xué)校將舉行“How to do a meaningful thing?”的英語(yǔ)征文比賽，同學(xué)們熱烈討論了怎樣做一件有意義的事。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下表格內(nèi)容寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文，投稿參賽。
要求：
1、詞數(shù)80詞左右，開(kāi)頭已寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
2、語(yǔ)句通順，書(shū)寫(xiě)工整，表達(dá)規(guī)范。

有的同學(xué)建議	舉行一場(chǎng)慈善演出，籌錢(qián)幫助保護(hù)野生動(dòng)物，如大熊貓
另外一些同學(xué)建議	用零花錢(qián)給災(zāi)區(qū)和貧困地區(qū)的學(xué)生買(mǎi)學(xué)習(xí)用品
你的建議及感想	……

參考詞匯：1. organize a charity show   2. disaster areas
3. donate pocket money     4. sell old books to raise money
How to do a meaningful thing?
According to the notice from the Students’ Union, my classmates are discussing how to do a meaningful thing.
 
 
 
 
 
 

Answer 1

According to the notice from the Students’ Union, my classmates are discussing how to do a meaningful thing. Some students think we should organize a charity show to raise money for wild animals, such as giant pandas. Others think we should buy pencils, pens, notebooks, schoolbags and some other school things for the children in the disaster areas and poor areas.
I think we can try our best to help these students in poor families. I can help them with English, Maths, and so on. I can also give some books to them free.
As students, we should thank those who help us. We should help those in need and do a bit for our society.

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。要求根據(jù)提示詞, 以How to do a meaningful thing?為題寫(xiě)一篇短文。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，并且給出了具體要求，我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。注意時(shí)態(tài)與時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇文章語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，敘事清楚，詞匯及時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用正確，能夠把提示的內(nèi)容敘述清楚，語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫是一篇不錯(cuò)的文章。