Question

你身邊的每個人對你來說都具有特殊的意義。請以“My special_____”為題用英語寫一篇短文，描述你家庭的某個成員或你的朋友、老師、同學等。
要求：1.在題目空格處填入你要描述的對象， 如grandma, teacher 或friend等；
2. 文中不得出現真實姓名和學校名稱；
3.80詞左右。
My special

Answer 1

One possible version：
My special grandma
My grandma is special to me because we’re like friends. She always helps me out whenever I am in trouble. There are no secrets between us.
When I am with my grandma, we spend a lot of happy time together. I know my grandma is very smart because she seems to know everything. My grandma is good at many things. One thing she’s best at is cooking. She often cooks delicious food for me. I know my grandma loves me and I love her as well.

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，介紹自己的家庭成員，朋友、老師或同學。結合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現在時態，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結構主要為系表結構，注意一些常見句式的應用，比如：My grandma is ......；She always helps......；When I am......；My grandma is ......及I know......等句式的應用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關系，注意文后要表達喜愛所描述的人。
【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了自己的奶奶，接下來介紹奶奶的特點，最后指出他們互相關愛。此處用了helps me out， in trouble，with my grandma，is good at，等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。