Question

根據(jù)中文和英文提示，寫一封意思連貫，符合邏輯，不少于50詞的回信。信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，其詞數(shù)不計入所要完成的回信內(nèi)。所給英文提示詞語僅供選用，請不要寫出你的校名和姓名。
假如你叫李華，你的美國筆友Tom 上周剛過完生日。他想知道你經(jīng)常和誰一起過生日，怎么過的，你收到的最喜歡的禮物是什么，以及你喜歡它的原因。請你根據(jù)他的問題回復(fù)郵件。
提示詞語：cake, noodles, sing songs, make a wish, get presents
. Who do you often celebrate your birthday with ? Your parents? Your friends? Or…?
. What do you usually do on your birthday?
. What is your favorite present? Why do you like it?
To       Tom
From    Li Hua
Subject  Birthday
Hi! Tom，
I’m glad that you had a nice birthday party last week.
Yours.
Li Hua

Answer 1

Hi! Tom,
I'm glad that you had a nice birthday party last week. I always look forward to my  birthday every year because it means a lot to me.And I usually spend the birthday with my close friends.
On my birthday, we are used to holding a party where we sing and dance together. In order to make every birthday unforgettable. We often bake cakes by ourselves. What's more, it is very  interesting for us to paly various games such as playing cards, playing computer games, and watching videos.
The most exciting moment is receiving gifts given by my friends. My favorite present is a book about how to make progress from Lucy. It is such a useful book that I can learn not only  confidence but also patience. It is meaningful both for my study and life.
Birthday plays an important part in our daily life. If so, why not try to make it colorful and meaningful?
Yours,
LiHua

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，湯姆在來信中提出了幾個問題，所以我們在回信中對來信內(nèi)容都要有所回應(yīng)。結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容，可知本文主要是第二人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)進行敘述。語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達習(xí)慣。適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點說明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少。如:look forward to盼望；be used to doing sth習(xí)慣了做某事；in orderto為了；強調(diào)句式It is adj for sb to do sth，做某事對某人來說怎么樣等。多種句式的使用是本文看起來既條理清楚，又語意連貫。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用, 讓文章更出彩。