Question

一首 “ Where is the time？” 又一次引發(fā)了人們對時間的感慨，作為即將參加中考的你，將怎樣充分利用時間，為初中三年畫上一個圓滿的句號。請從以下幾個方面，以“ Treasure every minute”為題，寫一篇不少于100詞的短文。（文章里不能出現(xiàn)真實校名和人名）
（1）時間的重要性        (2) 你身邊浪費時間的現(xiàn)象
（3）你的時間去哪兒了  （4）你將怎樣充分利用余下的時間？
Treasure every minute
                                                                                     
                                                                                             
                                                                                    
                                                                                                                                                                                          

                                                                                             
                                                                                    
                                                                                  

Answer 1

People often say, "Time is money," But in fact time is more valuable than money. If money is spent, we can earn it back. However, if time is lost, it will never return. This is the reason why we must value time. The time we have is limited. But there are a lot of people who do not know the importance of time. They spend their time chatting, smoking or drinking .They do not realize that wasting time is simply wasting their valuable life. As for me, I spend most of my time doing homework.In a word, every minute is precious,we should make full use of our time.  Do not leave what can be done today to tomorrow.

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文。本文作者寫怎樣充分利用時間，為初中三年畫上一個圓滿的句號。全文主要用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。
【亮點說明】文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，例如in fact,a lot of, spend doing,As for,most of ,make full use of,In a word等短語，文中還用到了條件狀語從句If money is spent, ,if time is lost, 賓語從句that wasting time is simply wasting their valuable life.; 定語從句a lot of people who do not know the importance of time.文章層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。