Question

學校將要舉辦英語演講比賽，請你以China Dream , My dream 為題，根據以下提示寫一篇參賽演講稿，談談你的夢想（你想成為什么或做什么）。
提示:
l. What’s your dream?
2. Why do you have this dream?
3. How will you make your dream come true?
要求：
語言通順，意思連貫，書寫規范。
2 .詞數：80詞左右（開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數）
文中不能出現真實的姓名和學校名稱。
China Dream, My Dream
Hi, everyone! As we know, China Dream is the dream of every Chinese. As a student, my dream is_________
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Thank you for listening .

Answer 1

                        China Dream, My Dream
Hi, everyone! As we know, China Dream is the dream of every Chinese. As a student, my dream is to become a teacher，because I am good at singing, dancing and love children. If I become a teacher, I will work with children, teach them a lot of knowledge and I will be happy.
In order to make my dream come true, I will study harder than before and read a lot of books to get more knowledge at school. I am going to help my parents do some housework as possible as I can. I will finish my homework on time at home. From now on, I plan to do more exercise to build me up in my free time. And this can make me feel active to do things.
As the old saying goes, “Where there is a will, there is a way."
And I believe I will realize my dream one day.
Thank you for listening.

試題分析：這是一篇演講比賽稿，首先要用正確的格式去寫，首位有禮貌用語，了解英語的句子結構與漢語的不同，需要平時對課本上的課文要正確地理解，會仿照課文的句子寫出正確的英語句子，演講稿中介紹了自己的興趣愛和打算，所以注意用一般現在時，用第一人稱來敘述。
【亮點說明】短文用了一些名言，為文章增色不少，如：As the old saying goes, “Where there is a will, there is a way."等，為了上下文的銜接還用了一些過渡詞如：in order to，and等。