Question

假如你是一個(gè)無(wú)錫新市民，你叫Luo Hui, 來(lái)自湖南，目睹了無(wú)錫最近幾年的發(fā)展和變化，有喜有憂。于是你就給政府有關(guān)部門(mén)發(fā)了一份e-mail，談了一些自己的想法，并提出了一些合理的建議，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：
1. 最近幾年無(wú)錫發(fā)展很快；比如，道路變寬了；城里可供人們休閑的場(chǎng)所也多了；這里的人們過(guò)著幸福的生活；
2. 但是還存在一些嚴(yán)重的問(wèn)題：房?jī)r(jià)太高，許多人根本買(mǎi)不起房子；因?yàn)楣�業(yè)的發(fā)展，水和空氣被嚴(yán)重污染；人們很難呼吸到新鮮空氣。
3. 我的建議：……
注意：1. 短文須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，要求語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫；
2. 第3要點(diǎn)作2-3句話的適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
3. E-mail的開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
4. 詞數(shù)：80個(gè)詞左右。
Dear Sir or Madam,
How are you? It’s my great pleasure to write this e-mail to you.
My name is Luo Hui. I’m a middle school student. I moved to Wuxi with my parents five years ago because my parents found work here. ________________________________________
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Yours sincerely,
Luo Hui

Answer 1

 
Wuxi has developed quickly. For example, the roade become wide. There are many place for people to relax. Tth people here are living a happy life.
But there are still some problems. The prices of th e house are too high. Many people can’t afford to buy them at all. Water and air are badly terribly polluted. It is difficult for people to breathe fresh air.
I think we should stop some factories from dumping their waste into the river. We should also encourage people to protect our environment.

試題分析：這是一篇提綱式的給材料作文。要求介紹無(wú)錫市的變化及存在的問(wèn)題，并提出自己的建議。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文能表達(dá)出所有的要點(diǎn)，并提出了合理的建議。同時(shí)連詞的應(yīng)用和句式的變化也給文章增色不少.如For example, But， It is difficult for people to breathe fresh air.。