Question

14．假定你是李華．某教育集團正在你市組織中學生開展赴美冬令營活動，現招募一名學生領隊，你有意應聘．請根據以下要點，給該項目的負責人安娜寫一封英文自薦信．要點如下：
1．表示感興趣；
2．個人優勢（語言、文化、體質及性格等方面）；
3．希望得到回復．
注意：
1．詞數100左右；
2．可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；
3．開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數．
Dear Anna，
I'm glad to learn that you are looking for a student to be captain of the winter camp．
I'm quite interested in the position and I think I'm qualified for it．
Firstly，I have no problem communicating with English-speakers．Secondly，as an English lover，I've read a lot about America and have much knowledge of America customs．（高分句型一）Thirdly，as I'm always doing exercise in my spare time，I'm very fit．In addition，I'm easy to get along with and I enjoy working with others．（高分句型二）Above all，I have been to America．I was an exchange student there for three months．I'd appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration．（高分句型三）
I'm looking forward to your early reply．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據提示信息假定你是李華．某教育集團正在你市組織中學生開展赴美冬令營活動，現招募一名學生領隊，你有意應聘．請根據以下要點，給該項目的負責人安娜寫一封英文自薦信，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點包括：表示感興趣；個人優勢（語言、文化、體質及性格等方面）；希望得到回復．2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內進行分析、構思和想象．要依據提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序寫．3、根據要表達的內容確定句子的時態、語態．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：look for尋找；be interested in 對…感興趣；Firstly首先；Secondly其次；Thirdly第三；In addition另外；Above all最重要的是；take…into consideration把…考慮在內；
Secondly，as an English lover，I've read a lot about America and have much knowledge of America customs．（高分句型一）
In addition，I'm easy to get along with and I enjoy working with others．（高分句型二）
I'd appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Anna，
       I'm glad to learn that you are looking for a student to be captain of the winter camp．I'm quite interested in the position and I think I'm qualified for it．
       Firstly，I have no problem communicating with English-speakers．Secondly，as an English lover，I've read a lot about America and have much knowledge of America customs．（高分句型一）Thirdly，as I'm always doing exercise in my spare time，I'm very fit．In addition，I'm easy to get along with and I enjoy working with others．（高分句型二）Above all，I have been to America．I was an exchange student there for three months．I'd appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration．（高分句型三）
        I'm looking forward to your early reply．
                                                                                                           Yours sincerely，
                                                                                                                     Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．