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9．假如你是李華，你的美國網友Jack通過E-mail詢問你的暑假計劃．請你從下面的網站廣告中選擇一項你暑假要參加的活動，作為你的假期安排，并對Jack說明理由（至少三條）

注意：1．可適當增加細節使行文連貫．2．字數100字左右．3．開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數．
Dear Jack，
Now I'd like to share my plan for the summer holiday with you．Recently I've become interested in some attractive camps advertised on a website and I have made up my mind to take part in one of them---Volunteering in Another Country．（高分句型一）I have always dreamed of being a volunteer，because I'd like to offer necessary help to those who are really in need of it．（高分句型二）Besides，volunteering in another country will give me a good chance to experience a completely different culture．（高分句型三）Most importantly，I can exchange ideas with the local people and make them know more about China．
So I'm eager to join in the activity and I'm sure I will benefit greatly from it．How about your plan for this summer holiday？．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據提示信息假如你是李華，你的美國網友Jack通過E-mail詢問你的暑假計劃．請你從下面的網站廣告中選擇一項你暑假要參加的活動，作為你的假期安排，并對Jack說明理由，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內進行分析、構思和想象．要依據提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序寫．3、根據要表達的內容確定句子的時態、語態．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：Recently 最近；become interested in 對…感興趣； make up my mind to do下定決心去做某事；dream of 夢想；Besides另外；Most importantly更重要的是；join in參加；benefit  from從…中受益
Recently I've become interested in some attractive camps advertised on a website and I have made up my mind to take part in one of them---Volunteering in Another Country．（高分句型一）
I have always dreamed of being a volunteer，because I'd like to offer necessary help to those who are really in need of it．（高分句型二）
Besides，volunteering in another country will give me a good chance to experience a completely different culture．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Jack，
Now I'd like to share my plan for the summer holiday with you．
Recently I've become interested in some attractive camps advertised on a website and I have made up my mind to take part in one of them---Volunteering in Another Country．（高分句型一）I have always dreamed of being a volunteer，because I'd like to offer necessary help to those who are really in need of it．（高分句型二）Besides，volunteering in another country will give me a good chance to experience a completely different culture．（高分句型三）Most importantly，I can exchange ideas with the local people and make them know more about China．
So I'm eager to join in the activity and I'm sure I will benefit greatly from it．How about your plan for this summer holiday？
Yours，
Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．