Question

假如你是Amy，請你給你的網友Joan發一封電子郵件告訴她你在老師的幫助下學習英語的一些變化和取得的進步。

1. 過去：認為學英語就是背語法規則和英語單詞；不喜歡讀英語，更不愿意和同學練習對話。

2. 現在：意識到英語是說出來的，開始喜歡講英語并和同學用英語交流；經常上網閱讀一些新的英語文章并查閱一些英語資料，對英語越學越感興趣并且取得了很大的進步。

注意：1、詞數100左右； 2、開頭已給出，不記入總詞數。

Dear Joan,

I’m glad to send you an e-mail to tell you that I’m getting more and more interested in English.

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Yours sincerely,

Amy

Answer 1

One possible version:

Dear Joan,

I’m glad to send you an e-mail to tell you that I’m getting more and more interested in English.

However, in the past I thought learning English meant learning grammar rules and words by heart. I didn’t like to do any reading in English, nor was I willing to practise speaking English with my classmates.

Now with my English teacher’s help, I came to realize we learn to speak English by speaking as we learn to sing by singing. I began to enjoy speaking English and communicate with my classmates. I often read some fresh English news or articles and look up some information on the internet. As a result, I have made great progress in English.

Yours sincerely,

Amy

【解析】

試題分析：分析要求可知，要點有學習英語的變化和進步1.過去；2. 現在。短文應該用一般過去時和一般現在時對比過去個現在。用第一人稱。還應該盡量多使用較高級的詞匯和短語以及固定句式，注意句子之間的連貫性。

【亮點說明】 文中用了一些高級的短語和句式。如：learning English meant learning…分詞做主語和賓語；nor was I willing to practise speaking English否定詞位于句首，句子倒裝， came to realize，和As a result, I have made great progress in English等都很不錯。

考點：提綱作文。