Question

基礎寫作（15分）

假如你是李華，請你使用5個句子就本校食堂服務(canteen service)的狀況給校長寫一封信。開頭和結尾已為你寫好。

內容包括：

優(yōu)點	不足	建議
食堂干凈	價格偏高	希望學校盡快解決問題
飯菜可口	種類偏少
服務態(tài)度好	等候時間較長

Dear Mr. Principal.

I am a senior student of our school. I'd like to say something about the canteen service in our school.

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Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Mr. Principal,

I am a senior student of our school. I'd like to say something about the canteen service in our school.

In general, the service is satisfactory. The hall is clean and tidy and the dishes taste delicious as well. What's more, the workers there treat us as their friends, which makes us feel very happy.

However, we feel the price of the meals is a little too high, Besides, we can only have a limited variety of dishes with little change every week. In addition, we often have to stand in line for a long time before we can get the meal. You could understand how precious time is to us students. Therefore, may I suggest something be done to solve the problems so that we can all enjoy our meals at school?

Thanks for your consideration.

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達出來. 動筆前，一定要認真分析要點，理解要點要表達的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題。本作文中給出的要點比較具體,故需要準確表達.寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化。平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作聯系以外，還可以適當記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。

【亮點說明】范文中運用一些常見的短語In general一般來說；What's more而且；In addition此外；You could understand how precious time is to us students.這個句子how引導understand的賓語從句；Therefore, may I suggest something be done to solve the problems so that we can all enjoy our meals at school這個句子中suggest做建議講，賓語從句用（should）do;

考點： 提綱類作文