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3．假如你叫李華，你們的外教老師Mr Jenkins邀請你和幾名同學(xué)今晚去他的公寓參加他的生日派對．但你臨時(shí)有事不能赴約．請給他寫一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：
1．祝他生日樂；
2．表示歉意；
3．說明原因；
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右：2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Dear Mr Jenkins，
Happy birthday to you!It is my honour to be invited to your birthday party tonight．But I am terribly sorry to say that I can't accept your invitation．Just now I received a notice by a company which offered me a chance to have an interview tomorrow．（高分句型一）To broaden my horizon and gain some experience，I applied to the company for a temporary position in my winter holiday．（高分句型二）I cherish it the chance so much that I have to make prepare full preparations for it．（高分句型三）You are not only my best teacher but also my best friend．It is sure that you will give me your understanding．
A bunch of flowers with my best wishes will reach you tonight．Happy birthday to you again．
Yours
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息假如你叫李華，你們的外教老師Mr Jenkins邀請你和幾名同學(xué)今晚去他的公寓參加他的生日派對．但你臨時(shí)有事不能赴約．請給他寫一封郵件，寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點(diǎn)包括：祝他生日樂；表示歉意；說明原因；2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：broaden  horizons拓展視野；apply to申請；make prepare full preparations for 為…做好充分準(zhǔn)備；not only，but also 而且；
Just now I received a notice by a company which offered me a chance to have an interview tomorrow．（高分句型一）
To broaden my horizon and gain some experience，I applied to the company for a temporary position in my winter holiday．（高分句型二）
I cherish it the chance so much that I have to make prepare full preparations for it．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Mr Jenkins，
       Happy birthday to you!It is my honour to be invited to your birthday party tonight．But I am terribly sorry to say that I can't accept your invitation．Just now I received a notice by a company which offered me a chance to have an interview tomorrow．（高分句型一）To broaden my horizon and gain some experience，I applied to the company for a temporary position in my winter holiday．（高分句型二）I cherish it the chance so much that I have to make prepare full preparations for it．（高分句型三）You are not only my best teacher but also my best friend．It is sure that you will give me your understanding．
       A bunch of flowers with my best wishes will reach you tonight．Happy birthday to you again．
                                                                                                 Yours，
                                                                                                 Li Hua

點(diǎn)評 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．