Question

假設你是一名初三畢業生，考上了理想的學校。今天是開學第一天，請你根據下表所列的 內容要點，用英語寫一篇日記，寫下這一天的感受。

去校前	興奮(原因自擬）；擔憂（原因自擬）
到校后	發現老師、同學友好；忘了緊張、感覺自在
離校時	不會再擔心；相信會快樂

注意：
1、詞數90左右；
2、日記的開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數；
3、日記須包括所有內容要點，不要逐詞翻譯，可適當發揮，使其連貫、通順；
4、日記中不得出現真實的人名、校名等相關信息。
Monday，Sept. 3     Fine
Today was the first day of my new life. I looked at my new books and checked everything for the new school year. I was excited as well as worried.

Answer 1

Monday, Sept. 3 Fine
Today was the first day of my new life. I looked at my new books and checked everything for the new school year, I was excited as well as worried.
I was excited because I am a student of senior middle school now. I was worried because I didn’t quite know about the teachers, students in this school. I was afraid that I couldn’t fit in well.
When I got to school, I found everyone was really sweet to me. Teachers were kind and ready to help us. I soon forgot my nervousness. 1 felt at home.
At the end of today, I felt no more fear and I believe I will have lots of fun at this new school.

試題分析：考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示認真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態。運用適當的短語表達中心思想，增加作文的可讀性。完成提示詞時也要符合事實。溫馨提醒：考生必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。
【亮點說明】這篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少。學習中注意總結,牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當引用,使文章的表達更有邏輯性,更富有條理。