Question

不久前，全國有部分省市出臺一項(xiàng)新政策：高考英語將由150分降為100分，此事在國內(nèi)引起極大爭議。有的人認(rèn)為此舉很好，有的人則認(rèn)為不妥。作為一名中學(xué)生，你的看法是什么？請分析其原因。
注意：1. 詞數(shù)80詞左右；開頭已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分。
3. 參考詞匯：reform改革；master掌握；advanced先進(jìn)的
Not long before, a new policy aroused a heated discussion that the mark of English will be reduced from 150 to 100. …

Answer 1

One possible version：
Not long before, a new policy aroused a heated discussion that the mark of English will be reduced from 150 to 100.
As a student, in my opinion, it is of the same importance to learn Chinese and English well. We Chinese certainly should learn our mother language well. At the same time, English is an international language and tool. We should master it better to know about the world and learn advanced technology abroad to serve our motherland. What’s more, as China is developing quickly, we have more chances to communicate with foreigners in English.
In a word, whether the mark of English will be reduced or not, we students should learn it well.

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，說出自己對高考英語分值下降的看法。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：it is of the same importance to......；We Chinese certainly should......；English is......；as China is ......及whether the mark of English will be......等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，注意運(yùn)用提供的參考詞匯。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了一項(xiàng)新政策：高考英語將由150分降為100分，接下來介紹自己對這項(xiàng)政策的看法，最后無論如何都要學(xué)好英語。此處用了of the same importance，know about，have more chances to ，communicate with等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。