Question

13．學會自我保護是青少年需要具備的一種能力．請根據以下所給內容要點，以"How to Protect Ourselves？"為題寫一篇英文短文，談談怎樣自我保護．
內容要點：1．交友要小心，尤其是網上交友；
2．上下樓梯時不要擁擠；
3．遵守交通規則；
4．不要獨自去游泳，不去河、湖游泳；
5．…（其他）
要求：1．文中必須包括所給要點1-5項內容，可展開思路，適當發揮；
2．文中不能出現真實的校名、人名和其他真實信息；
3．不少于80詞．
提示詞：上下樓梯go upstairs or downstairs，擁擠join a crowd
How to Protect Ourselves
It's important to protect ourselves．No matter who you are，what you do，safety is the most important．For students，their parents and teachers care their safety most．
But how to protect ourselves？First，be careful when making friends，especially net friends．Second，don't join a crowd when go up and down the stairs．Third，follow the traffic rules．Fourth，you had better not swim alone in the rivers or lakes．At last，if we are in danger，we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe．
In short，everyone needs to learn how to protect ourselves and stay away from danger．Remember that safety comes first．It's not only important for themselves，but also for their parents and others．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內容是以"How Can We Protect Ourselves？"為題．談談在生活中青少年應該怎樣自我保護．時態主要為一般現在時．人稱主要為第二，三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：
1．交友要小心，尤其是網上交友；
2．上下樓梯時不要擁擠；
3．遵守交通規則；
4．不要獨自去游泳，不去河、湖游泳；
5．其他
常用到的重點短語：
make friends交朋友
in danger危險中
call sb for help打電話給某人求助
in time 及時
stay away from 遠離
【高分句型】
1．At last，①if we ②are in danger，we must ③call the police for help④in time⑤so that we can ⑥keep ourselves safe．
①if引導的條件狀語從句．主句含有情態動詞must，從句用一般現在時．
②be in danger處于危險中
③call sb for help打電話給某人求助．
④in time 及時
⑤so that引導的目的狀語從句
⑥keep sb+adj保持某人怎樣
2．①In short，everyone needs to learn ②how to protect ourselves and ③stay away from danger．
①插入語，簡言之．
②疑問詞+to do sth作為learn的賓語．
③stay away from 遠離…
3．It's not only important for themselves，but also for their parents and others．
not only…but also…不僅…而且…，連接兩個對等的成分．

解答 How to Protect Ourselves
It's important to protect ourselves．No matter who you are，what you do，safety is the most important．For students，their parents and teachers care their safety most．
But how to protect ourselves？First，be careful when making friends，especially net friends．（交友要小心，尤其是網上交友）Second，don't join a crowd when go up and down the stairs．（上下樓梯時不要擁擠）Third，follow the traffic rules．（遵守交通規則）Fourth，you had better not swim alone in the rivers or lakes．（不要獨自去游泳，不去河、湖游泳）At last，if we are in danger，we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe．（其他：危險時報警）【高分句型】
In short，everyone needs to learn how to protect ourselves and stay away from danger．【高分句型】．Remember that safety comes first．It's not only important for themselves，but also for their parents and others．【高分句型】（總結）

點評 本文是一篇提綱作文，內容貼近生活，學會自我保護是青少年需要具備的一種意識和能力，寫一篇關于自我保護的作文，學生有話可說．在寫作時要表達清楚，信息完整，語言通順，語意連貫．充分利用好提示語言，使作文結構完整．同時要注意情態動詞的運用讓文章更飽滿．