Question

王林是第一中學的九年級的學生，今年夏天就畢業了，三年期間王林改變了很多，請根據以下內容，用英語寫一篇短文，記錄王林的成長過程，并談談你對他未來的期望。

In the past	1. 性格內向，不敢在人前講話。 2. 歷史學得不好。 3. 不愛運動，沉迷網上游戲。
At present	1. 樂于分享，與同學相處很好。 2. 各科成績優異，……(舉一例) 3. 積極組織并參加各類活動，……(舉一例)
Your expectations	……（兩點）

要求：1. 詞數80－100詞左右

2. 文中不得出現真實人名或校名。

3. 文章必須包含所提供的要點。

Wang Lin is a ninth grade student. He’ll graduate this summer. He’s changed a lot during the last three years.

In the past, ___________________________________________________________________

 

Answer 1

Wang Lin is a ninth grade student. He’ll graduate this summer. He’s changed a lot during the last three years.

In the past, he is shy, and he was afraid to speak in public. He was not good at history. He didn’t like sport. He also lost himself in surfing the Internet.

Now he likes sharing everything with his friends and he gets on well with his friends. He is good at all the subjects, especially in English. He is always first in our class. He takes active part in all kinds of action. Such as last month he won the champion in the 100-meter race.

I hope he will make great progress in math and he’ll be healthier in the future .

【解析】

試題分析：本文應以第三人稱書寫。分三部分：第一部分寫王林的過去，主要使用一般過去時態；第二部分寫王林的現在，主要使用一般現在時態；第三部分寫對王林的期望，主要使用一般將來時態。

【亮點說明】本文段落分明，語句通順。在寫作中使用了不少短語和句型，為文章增色不少，如：be afraid to do sth害怕做某事，lost oneself in surfing the Internet.沉溺于上網，get on well with sb與某人相處融洽，takes active part in積極參加，I hope he will make great progress in math and he’ll be healthier in the future我希望他會在數學方面長足進步，將來他會更健康。

考點：提綱作文。