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5．根據(jù)中文大意和英文提示詞語(yǔ)，寫(xiě)出意思連貫，符合邏輯，不少于60詞的短文．所給英文提示詞語(yǔ)供選用．請(qǐng)不要寫(xiě)出你的校名和姓名．
還記得去年7月21日那場(chǎng)大雨嗎？向陽(yáng)派出所所長(zhǎng)李方洪為救鳳凰亭村村民，獻(xiàn)出了自己寶貴的生命．請(qǐng)你以"Learn from him!"為題，發(fā)一篇微博．說(shuō)說(shuō)李所長(zhǎng)，談?wù)勀愕母惺芤约拔覀儜?yīng)該學(xué)習(xí)他什么．
提示詞語(yǔ)：a police officer，the flood of July 21^st，villagers，safety，be deeply moved，brave．
It was last July 21^st．It rained so hard in Beijing that some villages were watered by the flood．At about 1：00 o'clock，Li Fanghong，the police officer of our district，went to see the villagers．When he saw rainwater coming into one of the houses，he organized them to leave to safety．However，while he was carrying an old man，he was killed by electricity．
I was deeply moved by his story．I think he is not only a good officer but also a brave hero of us．He did his best when he faced great danger．I should learn from him．I will think of others first and help them as much as possible when facing difficulties．．

Answer 1

分析 重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)：
1．be deeply moved 被深深感動(dòng)
2．face great danger面對(duì)巨大的危險(xiǎn)
3．learn from sb．向某人學(xué)習(xí)
高分句型：
【高分句型】1．It rained so hard in Beijing that some villages were watered by the flood．
北京的雨下得太大了，以至于有些村莊被洪水淹了．（so…that…"如此…以至于…"引導(dǎo)結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句）
【高分句型】2．I think he is not only a good officer but also a brave hero of us．我認(rèn)為他不僅是一個(gè)好干部也是我們的英雄．（not only …but also…不僅…而且…，連接并列的句子成分）

解答 It was last July 21^st．It rained so hard in Beijing that some villages were watered by the flood【高分句型】．At about 1：00 o'clock，Li Fanghong，the police officer of our district，went to see the villagers．When he saw rainwater coming into one of the houses，he organized them to leave for safety．However，while he was carrying an old man，he was killed by electricity．
    I was deeply moved by his story．I think he is not only a good officer but also a brave hero of us【高分句型】．He did his best when he faced great danger．I should learn from him．I will think of others first and help them as much as possible when facing difficulties．

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