Question

20．網(wǎng)絡(luò)被廣泛地應(yīng)用于各個領(lǐng)域．人們通過網(wǎng)絡(luò)學(xué)習(xí)、交流、工作、娛樂…請以"The Internet"為題，寫一篇英語小短文，分享你對網(wǎng)絡(luò)的看法，并向大家介紹你平時是怎樣使用網(wǎng)絡(luò)的．
要求：1．可以拓展，短文不少于90個詞；
2．文中請勿使用真實姓名、地點或所在學(xué)校名稱．
The Internet
The Internet makes our life nicer，easier and more colorful．I often use the Internet to download useful information，chat with my friends or write e-mails．I also listen to music or play games on the Internet．Going shopping online is easy and interesting．But not everything on the Internet is good for us students．And we shouldn't spend too much time on the Internet．Playing computer games too much is bad forour health，especially forour eyes．So I'm sure the Internet is good for us if we use it properly．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：And we shouldn't spend too much time on the Internet我們不應(yīng)該花太多時間上網(wǎng)．sb．spend some time （in）（doing） sth．某人花費時間做某事．
高分句型二：Playing computer games too much is bad for our health，especially for our eyes玩電腦游戲太多對我們的健康有害，尤其是對我們的眼睛．動名詞短語Playing computer games充當(dāng)主語，謂語用三單形式；be bad for對…有害處．

解答 The Internet makes our life nicer，easier and more colorful．（對網(wǎng)絡(luò)的看法） I often use the Internet to download useful information，chat with my friends or write e-mails．I also listen to music or play games on the Internet．Going shopping online is easy and interesting．（怎樣使用網(wǎng)絡(luò)，分析優(yōu)點）But not everything on the Internet is good for us students．And we shouldn't spend too much time on the Internet．（高分句型一）Playing computer games too much is bad for our health，especially for our eyes．（高分句型二）（分析缺點）So I'm sure the Internet is good for us if we use it properly．（得出結(jié)論）

點評 （1）句型多樣化，不要I（We）…到底，使人覺得乏味．（2）適當(dāng)使用一些并列句或主從復(fù)合句．（3）進(jìn)一步描繪人或事物時，適當(dāng)使用定語從句．（4）適當(dāng)使用分詞或分詞短語，烘托謂語動詞．（5）偶爾使用一下倒裝句，增加新鮮感．