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4．泰興公園最近有很多問題．請你寫一封80詞左右的信呼吁人們保護(hù)環(huán)境，遵守規(guī)則．要點(diǎn)如下，信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)．要點(diǎn)如下：
1．首先，不要亂扔垃圾，保持公園的清潔，不要摘公園里的花；
2．其次，在公園里大聲談笑是粗魯無禮的，請把聲音放低；
3．第三，如果有人擋住你的路，可以說"勞駕"等他移動(dòng)；
4．還應(yīng)向人們解釋保護(hù)公園的重要性；
5．做這些對我們的環(huán)境以及健康都有好處．
Dear all，
The environment in Taixing Park has become worse recently．We must do something to stop it．
                                             
Yours sincerely
Tom．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
Second，it's rude to talk or laugh loudly in the park．
句中使用的句型為：it is+形容詞+to do sth，這句話意為：再者，在公園大聲說笑很粗魯．
高分句型二：
Third，if someone is in your way，please say"Excuse me"and wait till he moves．
句中"if someone is in your way"為"if"引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句．這句話意為：第三，如果有人擋你的路，請說"勞駕"等他挪動(dòng)．

解答 Dear all，
The environment in Taixing Park has become worse recently．We must do something to stop it．（開篇點(diǎn)題）
First，we shouldn't drop litter everywhere and always keep the park clean．We should never pick flowers in the park．Second，it's rude to talk or laugh loudly in the park．【高分句型一】Please keep our voice down．Third，if someone is in your way，please say"Excuse me"and wait till he moves．【高分句型二】We should also explain to others the importance of protecting the park．It's good for our environment as well as our health by doing this．（提出建議）
    Yours sincerely，
    Tom

點(diǎn)評 寫作文時(shí)要注意平時(shí)語言的積累，避免出現(xiàn)語法錯(cuò)誤，寫作時(shí)注意條理清楚，語意通暢．