Question

12．請你以"A trip to…"為題寫一篇短文，介紹自己印象最深的一次旅游．文章需涉及到以下信息：when，where，who，what you saw，what you did and your feeling．
注意：1、文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；
    2、語言通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；
    3、詞數(shù)80左右．
A trip to                                                   ．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
Then we enjoyed ourselves in a famous theme park我們在一家著名的主題公園玩得很開心．
enjoy oneself玩得開心
【高分句型二】
My trip to Sanya seemed short and tiring，but we really had a fantastic time there我去三亞的旅行似乎短暫疲勞，但是我們真的在那里玩得開心，
but表示轉(zhuǎn)折．

解答 Last month，I went on a trip to Sanya，Hainan．（時(shí)間地點(diǎn)）I went there by train with my parents．（任務(wù)）It took about 12 hours to get there．
On the first day，we walked around the city．It was quite a beautiful place．The sky was blue and the air was nice and clean．We all enjoyed the beautiful views．People there were friendly too．
On the second day，we visited one of the most famous beaches and some museums．Then we enjoyed ourselves in a famous theme park．【高分句型一】
We did some shopping on the third day．Mum and I bought a lot of things．After that，we had a big dinner in a seafood restaurant．
（經(jīng)過）
My trip to Sanya seemed short and tiring，but we really had a fantastic time there【高分句型二】．（感覺）

點(diǎn)評 寫作時(shí)要注意一些幾點(diǎn)：
（1）應(yīng)抓住文章中心，圍繞主題，根據(jù)提示列出要寫的信息要點(diǎn)．
（2）注意內(nèi)容是否充實(shí)、積極和健康．
（3）注意文章的結(jié)構(gòu)層次，要凸顯文章的主題．
（4）要注意語言規(guī)范，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，選材造句都盡量使用學(xué)過、見過的語言材料．