Question

20．根據要求完成短文寫作，請將作文寫在答題卡指定的位置上．
感恩是美好的，感恩別人和被別人感恩，都是幸福的．學會去感激別人，才會有和睦，有快樂，有彼此間的敬重．請以Learn to Be Grateful為題寫一篇作文．內容包括：
1學會感恩的重要性．
2你最想對誰表達感恩之情？為什么？
3請舉出生活中三種表達感恩之情的方式．
4呼吁大家學會感恩，引領更幸福美好的生活．
作文要求：
1不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出現學校真實的名稱和學生的真實姓名．
2語句連貫，詞數80個左右．開頭已經給出，不計入總詞數．
Learn to Be Grateful
Nowadays，more and more teenagers don't know how to be grateful to others．But as we all know，thanksgiving is wonderful．Learn to be grateful to others，                         

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：We should be thankful to people who helped us or care for us我們應該感謝幫助我們或照顧我們的人．這是由who引導的定語從句，先行詞是people，care for是一個固定短語，意思是關心，照顧．
高分句型二：As for me，the person I want to thank most is my mother至于我，我最想感謝的人是我的母親．這是一個定語從句的省略，先行詞是the person，可以用關系詞who/that，由于充當了感謝的賓語，故可以省略．

解答 Nowadays，more and more teenagers don't know how to be grateful to others．But as we all know，thanksgiving is wonderful．Learn to be grateful to others，we'll receive more love and find the goodness of life（說明感恩的重要性）．We should be thankful to people who helped us or care for us（高分句型一）．As for me，the person I want to thank most is my mother（高分句型二）．She gives me much love and courage to face difficulties（說明感恩的對象及原因）．I'll help to do as much as possible at home．To express thanks，there are many other ways，such as sending some flowers，writing a thank-you note or giving back the kindness we have received to people around us（說明表達感恩之情的三種方式）．
Learning to be grateful lead us a happier life．Let's express thanks every day（呼吁大家要感恩）．

點評 在寫作時，要盡量使用高分單詞，短語和句子，句式，以便為文章增色．