Question

15．假如你是李華，你們學(xué)校正在開展"愛心傳遞，從我做起"主題教育括動．請你用英語寫一篇短文給某英文網(wǎng)站投稿，談?wù)勀銥槭裁匆�獻(xiàn)愛心，當(dāng)別人需要幫助時(shí)你通常做什么，以及你這樣做的感受．
提示詞語：help，books，money．warm clothes，try one's best，proud
提示問題：●Why do you show your kindness to others．？
●What do you usually do when someone needs help？
●How do you feel？
At my school，we often give hands to others in trouble．                                              ．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
We are talking about what we can do to give hands to others in trouble．
"what we can do"做"talk about"的賓語，"to give hands to others in trouble"為不定式表目的．這句話意為：我們正在討論可以做什么來幫助處于困境的人們．
高分句型二：
Then I try my best to meet their needs in their daily life．
"try one's best to do sth 盡某人最大努力做某事"、"daily life 日常生活"，這句話意為：我盡我最大的努力來滿足他們的日常生活需要．

解答 At my school，we often give hands to others in trouble．We are talking about what we can do to give hands to others in trouble．【高分句型一】（點(diǎn)明主旨）It is very important for us to show our kindness to others because everyone needs help when they get into trouble．（敘述原因）I usually send my books or money to the children in poor areas．When winter comes，I often offer some warm clothes to them．I always write to the children and know what they need．Then I try my best to meet their needs in their daily life．【高分句型二】Now we have become close friends．（怎樣幫助別人）I feel very proud when they tell me they have made great progress at school．（表達(dá)感受）

點(diǎn)評 寫作文時(shí)要注意平時(shí)語言的積累，避免出現(xiàn)語法錯(cuò)誤，寫作時(shí)注意條理清楚，語意通暢．