Question

請以“My best friend”為題，根據下列要點提示寫一篇作文：

1、Daniel, 13歲，陽光中學七年級一班。

2、戴著眼鏡，個子不高。

3、經常做運動，很少吃漢堡和喝可樂。

4、對畫畫很感興趣。沒有很多時間玩電腦游戲。

5、他家附近有一個購物中心，他經常周末在那里購物。

6、今天他穿了一件白色的T-恤和一條藍色的牛仔褲，看起來很干練。

注意：

1，詞數100詞左右。

2，短文須包括所有要點內容，不要逐詞翻譯，可適當發揮，使短文連貫通順。

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Answer 1

My best friend

My best friend is Daniel. He is 13 years old. He studies in Sunshine Middle School. He is in Class 1, Grade 7. He is short and wears glasses. He is wearing a white T-shirt and a pair of blue jeans today. He looks smart. He has a healthy lifestyle. He often exercises and he seldom has hamburgers and coke. He thinks they are bad for his health. He is interested in drawing. And he likes playing computer games too. As a student, he is busy with his study. So he doesn’t have much time to play computer games. There is a shopping mall near his home. He often goes shopping there. And he thinks it’s a good place to buy things.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文。本文要求按照所給的題目結合提示內容完成這篇介紹好朋友的作文。寫作中要包含介紹朋友的幾個方面：姓名、年齡、就讀學校班級和外貌、性格及愛好，今天的穿著等進行陳述，表達出朋友的與眾不同的特點等。根據材料內容可知本文主要是一般現在時態，人稱主要是第三人稱，注意并列連詞的使用及主謂一致問題。寫作中注意上下文的過度，符合邏輯關系。

【亮點說明】這篇短文全面、詳盡地闡明了朋友的各項基本信息，并包含了文中所要求的全部內容。其中使用了一些固定句式和短語，包含形容詞的準確使用為文章增色不少.如He looks smart. He has a healthy lifestyle.，are bad for，play computer games，go shopping，文中對于名詞的使用準確恰當，如wearing a white T-shirt and a pair of blue jeans，have much time學習中再注意總結、牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當引用，使文章的表達更有邏輯性，更富有條理。

考點：提綱作文。