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18．端午節是中國的傳統節日．吃粽子是中國的一種傳統習俗．每年農歷五月初，中國百姓家家戶戶要浸糯米、洗粽葉、包粽子．請根據以下提示，描寫制作粽子的過程．
要求：1、制作過程必須包括以下的五個環節；
2、詞數80詞左右（開頭的首句已給出，不計算在總詞數內）．
蒸粽子steam…

How shall we make Zongzi？
To make this special food，we need to haveone kilo of glutinous rice，half a kilo of beef，some red dates，two spoons of salt，some reed leaves and some strings．
How to make Zongzi？First，put the glutinous rice into the clean water and keep it for two hours．At the same time，wash some reed leaves and cut the beef into pieces．Next，shape the reed leaves by hand．Then，fill them with the glutinous rice and beef pieces．Add some red dates if you like．And then，tie Zongziwith strings．Finally，steam them．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內容是描寫制作粽子的過程．時態主要為一般現在時．人稱主要為第二人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：
1材料：糯米，粽葉，牛肉，紅棗，鹽，線
2步驟：浸糯米，切牛肉，攏粽葉，填充餡料，扎粽子，蒸粽子
常用到的重點短語：
put …into…把…放進…里面
at the same time 同時
cut…into pieces 切碎
by hand 手工的
【高分句型】
1．①At the same time，wash some reed leaves and②cut the beef into pieces．
①at the same time 同時
②cut…into pieces 切碎

2．Next，shape the reed leaves by hand．
by hand 手工的，作方式狀語

3．Add some red dates if you like．
if引導的條件狀語從句，主句是祈使句，從句用一般現在時．

解答 How shall we make Zongzi？
   To make this special food，we need to have one kilo of glutinous rice，half a kilo of beef，some red dates，two spoons of salt，some reed leaves and some strings．（材料）
   How to make Zongzi？First，put the glutinous rice into the clean water and keep it for two hours．At the same time，wash some reed leaves and cut the beef into pieces．（浸糯米，切牛肉）【高分句型】Next，shape the reed leaves by hand．（攏粽葉）【高分句型】Then，fill them with the glutinous rice and beef pieces．Add some red dates if you like．（填充餡料【高分句型】And then，tie Zongzi with strings．（扎粽子Finally，steam them．（蒸粽子）

點評 這里是一篇圖表作文，需要表達如何制作粽子，此類作文注意用一些表順序的詞來讓步驟流暢，句型主要是祈使句．動筆前要認真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點，并需有適當發揮．要注意句式的多樣性．