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8．你校開展"How to Deal with the Exam Stress"征文比賽，請你根據表格中提示的內容，寫一篇英語短文．

適當的壓力	•積極思考，認真學習； •及時復習，防止遺忘；
過重的壓力	•無法入睡，非常疲倦； •害怕考試，導致失敗；
應對的措施	•合理計劃，準備充分； •…（至少兩條）

要求：1．用上所給要點，并適當發揮，使短文連貫、通順；
2．詞數80左右，短文首句已給出，不計入總詞數；
3．文中不得提及考生所在學校及自己的姓名．
How to Deal with the Exam Stress
Everyone may have the exam stress．A little bit of stress can be a good thing to us．If we have proper stress，we can think actively and work harder．Besides it can remind us to review our lessons in time to remember them．So we can pass the exams easily．
However，if we have too heavy stress，we can't sleep well at night and we may feel too tired．We may fear the exams too much and fail in the end．
In my opinion，to deal with stress，we'd better plan and prepare well．We should also form some good habits，such as enough exercise and healthy diets．Then we'll feel relaxed and do well in the exams．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內容是以How to Deal with the Exam Stress為題介紹如何解決考試帶來的壓力．時態主要為一般現在時．人稱主要為第一人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：
1．適當的壓力；•積極思考，認真學習；•及時復習，防止遺忘；
2．過重的壓力；•無法入睡，非常疲倦；•害怕考試，導致失敗；
3．應對的措施；合理計劃，準備充分…

常用到的重點短語：
remind sb to do sth 提醒某人做某事
in the end 最終
deal with 處理
had better do sth 最好做某事
such as 例如
do well in擅長
【高分句型】
1．If we have proper stress，we can think actively and work harder．
if引導的條件狀語從句，主句含有情態動詞can，從句用一般現在時代替一般將來時
2．Besides it can①remind us to review our lessons in time ②to remember them．
①remind sb to do sth 提醒某人做某事，in time 及時
②動詞不定式做目的狀語．
3．①In my opinion，②to deal with stress，③we'd better plan and prepare well．
①in my opinion 依我看來，提出自己的觀點．
②動詞不定式做目的狀語．
③had better do sth 最好做某事

解答 How to Deal with the Exam Stress
Everyone may have the exam stress．A little bit of stress can be a good thing to us．If we have proper stress，we can think actively and work harder．【高分句型】Besides it can remind us to review our lessons in time to remember them．【高分句型】So we can pass the exams easily．（適當的壓力；積極思考，認真學習；及時復習，防止遺忘）
However，if we have too heavy stress，we can't sleep well at night and we may feel too tired．We may fear the exams too much and fail in the end．（過重的壓力；無法入睡，非常疲倦；害怕考試，導致失敗）
In my opinion，to deal with stress，we'd better plan and prepare well【高分句型】．We should also form some good habits，such as enough exercise and healthy diets．Then we'll feel relaxed and do well in the exams．（應對的措施；合理計劃，準備充分；養成良好的習慣）

點評 這是一篇給材料作文，介紹如何解決考試帶來的壓力．結合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現在時態，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結構主要為系表結構和動賓結構，注意一些常見句式的應用，比如：A little bit of stress can be…；it can remind us to…；if we have…及we'd better…等句式的應用．寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用．寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關系，注意文后要用題目要求的提綱內容．