Question

書面表達(共20分)

假設你叫王華，你的好朋友李林同學擬參加學校新一屆學生會主席競選,你認為他具有成為優秀學生會主席的品質和才能,并了解他的任后計劃,決定寫一封推薦信推薦他。

能力 與 品質	1.樂于助人，…… 2.想像力足夠豐富,…… 3.勇敢，曾幫助警察抓小偷。 4.有條理，…… 5.善于制作東西，制作的機器人會洗衣、掃地。
任后 計劃	1.美化校園，使它干凈整潔，地面沒有垃圾。 2.舉行各類競賽，…… 3.組織慈善活動，……

要求：1．短文應包括所提供的所有內容，特別是發揮部分。

2．詞數：100詞左右。開頭結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。

3．文中不得提及所在學校及本人姓名。

Dear Sir or Madam:

I’m writing to recommend my classmate Li Lin as the new chairperson of the Students’

Union. ______________________________________________________________________

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If he can be the new chairperson, __________________________________________

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I think Li Lin has all the personal qualities to be an excellent chairperson. I hope you can agree with me.

Yours sincerely

Wang Hua

 

Answer 1

Dear Sir or Madam:

I’m writing to recommend my classmate Li Lin as the new chairperson of the Students’ Union. He is sixteen years old, He was born in Taizhou. Now he is the monitor of Class Three, Grade Nine. He studies so carefully that he oftn gets prizes. When he grows up he wants to be a scientist. To achieve his dream, he tries his best to learn all the subjects well. Also, he is polite to others and is ready to help people in need. He thinks helping others makes him feel good. Besides above, he is good at making things. The robot he made can sing and dance. We all think he is creative and smart.

If he can be the new chairperson, he will make our school more beautiful and cleaner. And he will set up a charity to raise money for the people who need help.

I think Li Lin can be an excellent chairperson. I hope you can agree with me.

Yours sincerely

Wang Hua

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇利用圖表的給材料作文。要求介紹王華的優秀品質和才能，主要用第三人稱，和一般現在時態。

【亮點說明】這篇短文不僅介紹人物時注意避免句式重復而且使用了大量的的短語，可見該生英語功底扎實。.如so …that…, To achieve his dream， tries his best to ，is ready to, besides above. The robot he made can sing and dance定語從句等，使文章的表達更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。

考點：表格作文。