Question

書面表達(本題滿分20分)

劉濤是你的好友，請根據下表以My Close Friend為題寫一篇100詞左右的介紹他的短文，提示省略號部分需適當發揮。

姓名：Liu Tao	出生年月：1999. 8. 22	星座：Leo	班級：九（3）
相貌	近視；高而壯。
個人愛好	喜愛下中國象棋，拉小提琴；喜歡紅色，因為……； 喜歡看體育類電視節目，因為……。
品性能力	有幽默感，常……；有組織能力，能……；富有想象力，會……。
主要煩惱	有沒完沒了的家庭作業要做，無暇……，只得……； 太多的考試使他焦慮；家里太吵，不能……。
解決措施	列必做作業的清單；與家人朋友多溝通及分擔憂愁，不能將憂愁……
愿望	盼望沒有作業的假期，有更多時間進行課外活動；希望父母……。

My Close Friend

Liu Tao is my close friend. He _____________________________________________

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Answer 1

He was born on August，22nd, 1999. He is Leo, he is in Class3,Grade 9. Lui Tao is tall and strong ,but he is near-sighted and wears a pair of big glasses . Liu Tao is good at playing Chinese chess and the violin. Red is his favorite color, because red is symbolized hope and happiness in China. He also likes watching sports on TV, he loves NBA. Liu Tao has a good sense of humor and he often bring fun and joy to us. He has the strong organization ability and the rich imagination, too.

Now there are so many things bothering him. Such as too much homework, endless examination. As it is so noisy at home, He can't settle down to his study .A to-do list is a simple and great way to remember what you are about to do. Then try to share your worries with your family.

Liu Tao wishes to have a holiday without homework and have plenty of time to do sports. He also thinks that his parents should give space to him.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內容表達出來。動筆前要認真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點，并適當發揮。根據材料內容可知本文主要是一般現在時態，主語是第三人稱，注意時態語時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當使用連詞，注意上下文聯系緊密，符合邏輯關系。

【亮點說明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少.如: be good at擅長；symbolized hope and happiness 象征希望和幸福；too much homework, endless examination無數的作業無盡的考試等, 學習中注意總結,牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當引用,使文章的表達更有邏輯性,更富有條理.

考點：提綱作文。