Question

17．九年級學生的學習壓力巨大．為了舒緩學習壓力，你們班上周末組織了一次徒步（Hiking）活動．請你根據以下提示，以Tom的名義向你的網友Bob描述一下活動過程及感受．
活動內容：
1．集合時間和地點：上周六上午8：00，學校大門口．
2．交通工具：校車．
3．徒步地點：紅樹林公園．終點：深圳灣體育館．
4．自帶食物和水，大家一起分享．
5．午餐后進行了一些戶外活動，比如：玩游戲，講故事等等．
6．下午4：00 返校．
參考詞匯：
紅樹林公園：Mangrove Forest Park
深圳灣體育館：Shenzhen Bay Stadium
戶外活動：outdoor activity
注意：
1．寫作中必須包含所給要點，可以適當發揮，不要簡單翻譯．
2．詞數80左右，開頭已經寫好，不計入總詞數．
3．寫作中請勿提及真實校名和姓名．
Dear Bob，
In order to relieve our study stress，we went hiking in the Mangrove Forest Park last weekend． 
                                          
Yours，
Tom．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
Because it was far from our school，we took the school bus．因為距離我們學校比較遠，所以我們乘校車去．
because引導原因狀語從句的應用；take the school bus 乘校車
【高分句型二】
There were some flowers whose names we knew and others we didn't．有一些花，我們叫得上名字，有一些叫不上名字．
There be句型的應用；定語從句"whose names we knew"的應用

解答 Dear Bob，
In order to relieve our study stress，we went hiking in the Mangrove Forest Park last weekend．We gathered at 8：00AM last Saturday in front of our school gate．Because it was far from our school，we took the school bus．【高分句型一】
It was a very fun thing that we could carry foods and drinks by ourselves and shared them with our classmates．We were singing and laughing along the way to the Forest Park．In the park，we saw many kinds of trees and flowers．There were some flowers whose names we knew and others we didn't．【高分句型二】I was glad to learn something from this hiking．
After the pleasant lunch time，we also had some outdoor activities，like games，stories and so on．
The hiking ended in the Shenzhen Bay Stadium and we went back to school at 4：00PM．
I had a nice weekend because of this hiking．Hoping we can go hiking some day．
Yours，
Tom

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