Question

假如明天是你媽媽的生日，你想為媽媽做一份炒飯，請根據所給內容提示，寫一篇你做炒飯的過程。1. 2. 3.
參考詞匯：1. fried rice  cooked meat   oil   salt   green onions(蔥)
2. cook   cut   put    fry    add
3. carefully  finely(細微地)  slowly  lightly
要   求：1.語言表達準確，語意通順、連貫；
2.書寫工整、規范；
3.根據所給內容及參考詞匯，可適當發揮；
4.文中不得出現真實的校名和姓名；
3. 詞數：70詞左右。文章的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。
Tomorrow is my mother’s birthday.

Answer 1

One possible version 1：
Tomorrow is my mother’s birthday. I want to make fried rice for her in order to express my love. I am sure I can cook it very well. Now let me show you how to cook it. First, cut some cooked meat very finely. Next, I need to put some oil in the pan. Then fry the meat lightly. After that, I need to add the rice slowly. Fry it for a few minutes. Finally, add some salt and green onions. Now the fried rice is ready.(82words)
One possible version 2：
Tomorrow is my mother’s birthday, I want to do something for my mother, I ’d like to make fried rice for her. First, I must cut some cooked meat very finely. Next, I need to put some oil in the pan, fry the meat lightly. After that, I need to add the rice slowly. Then fry it for a few minutes. Finally, I should add some salt and green onion. How delicious! My fried rice is ready, I hope my mother will enjoy it.

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，寫做炒飯的過程。結合所給材料，可知本文主要用一般現在時，人稱為單數第一，人稱，句子結構主要為祈使句和帶有情態動詞的句子。注意做法步驟的先后順序。比如：first，second，third等句式的應用。
【亮點說明】本文內容涵蓋所有要點，格式正確，語言流暢，表達準確，意思連貫；先簡要說明寫作目的。同時運用first，second，then, finally表順序的詞使文章先后順序清楚、意思連貫。恰當地運用了參考詞匯表達不同步驟的不同做法。第一篇以祈使句為主；第二篇祈使句加帶有must、need to等情態動詞的句子是主要特點。