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18．前不久，中央電視臺(tái)"焦點(diǎn)訪談"欄目曾就"中國式過馬路"現(xiàn)象進(jìn)行了不少采訪和評論．請根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇英語短文．
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1結(jié)合自己的所見所聞或親身經(jīng)歷描述"行人闖紅燈"（pedestrians run the red light）引發(fā)的若干問題；
2 提出一些解決措施．
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1 內(nèi)容包括所給提示要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2 不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和地名；
3 詞數(shù)：80-100．短文的開頭已給出（不計(jì)詞數(shù)）
Not long ago，CCTV"Focus Talk"carried out many interviews and made some relevant comments on the phenomena---"Crossing roads in the Chinese style"．              ．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：I was so hurried that I ignored the red light我是如此匆忙以至于我忽視了紅燈．so…that…如此…以致…，后面引導(dǎo)一個(gè)句子．
高分句型二：As far as I am concerned，it has profound significance to take actions就我而言，采取行動(dòng)具有深遠(yuǎn)的意義．As far as I am concerned在我看來；take actions采取行動(dòng)．

解答 Not long ago，CCTV"Focus Talk"carried out many interviews and made some relevant comments on the phenomena---"Crossing roads in the Chinese style"．（說明現(xiàn)象）
Take one of my experiences for example．It was a Tuesday and it rained cat and dog．There was only a few minutes left for me to go to school on time．I was so hurried that I ignored the red light．（高分句型一）It was so dangerous for me that the car hardly hit me seriously．From then on，I never dare to run the red light．I think it can lead to many problems．There is no doubt that it will not only make the traffic heavier but also lose your own life．（引發(fā)的若干問題）
As far as I am concerned，it has profound significance to take actions．（高分句型二）For the government，they should make laws and appeal to the importance of safety．For the other people，we should cherish our lives and obey the traffic rules．（解決措施）

點(diǎn)評 （1）句型多樣化，不要I（We）…到底，使人覺得乏味．（2）適當(dāng)使用一些并列句或主從復(fù)合句．（3）進(jìn)一步描繪人或事物時(shí)，適當(dāng)使用定語從句．（4）適當(dāng)使用分詞或分詞短語，烘托謂語動(dòng)詞．（5）偶爾使用一下倒裝句，增加新鮮感．