Question

目前我國中學生的健康嚴重下降，引起了父母、學校和專家的憂慮。為解決這一問題，有人提出將體育納入高考。結合實際，談談你的看法：

1.是否贊成體育納入高考及原因；

2.簡述健康與學習的關系；

3.你認為學校應該做些什么來提高學生的身體素質。

注意：

1. 詞數 120 左右

2. 可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫

 

Answer 1

【答案】

(1)The fact that high school students are currently experiencing a sharp decline in health has aroused wide concern among parents, schools and experts.(2)To have this problem solved, some people propose PE included as a subject in the College Entrance Examinations. (3) I’m against the idea because it is by no means practical. Setting up standards for the exam alone may well be a hard task. It is far beyond our ability to manage such a nationwide exam in sports field.（4）However, good health is an essential foundation upon which to learn. Only when one is in good health can they guarantee efficient learning. （5）Therefore, it is schools’ responsibility to help develop their students’ awareness of the importance of keeping fit. Moreover, schools should provide sufficient sports facilities for their students to have regular exercise.

【解析】

試題分析：考查提綱式作文：這是一篇提綱類的書面表達，提綱列的非常具體，考生需要用自己所學的知識把它們翻譯出來，但是不能逐字逐句的翻譯，要靈活運用英語知識，采用不同的表達方式將各要點完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當。語言力求準確、簡潔。根據情景的發展，按順序安排好材料。同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。考生必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等

【亮點說明】 (1)The fact that high school students are currently experiencing a sharp decline in health has aroused wide concern among parents, schools and experts.這是同位語從句

(2)To have this problem solved, some people propose PE included as a subject in the College Entrance Examinations.這是不定式做目的狀語

(3) I’m against the idea because it is by no means practical. 這句話用了 ，Setting up standards for the exam alone may well be a hard task.這句話用了動名詞做主語， It is far beyond our ability to manage such a nationwide exam in sports field.這句話用了it做形式主語，

（4）However, good health is an essential foundation upon which to learn.這句話用了定語從句。 Only when one is in good health can they guarantee efficient learning. 這句話用了倒裝句。

（5）Therefore, it is schools’ responsibility to help develop their students’ awareness of the importance of keeping fit. 這句話用了it做形式主語，

考點：考查提綱類書面表達