Question

2009年6月，江蘇省教育廳做出決定：嚴禁中小學暑假和雙休日補課。請根據以下要求，用英語報寫一篇文章。

要求：1. 聽到這一決定時你的想法（兩點）。

2. 你家人對這一決定的反應。

3. 簡述你今年暑期的安排（包括學習方面、身體鍛煉、其他活動等）和收獲。

注意：1. 對所給要點逐一陳述，適當發揮，結合事實闡述自己的認識。

2. 詞數120左右。開頭已寫好，不計入總詞數。

3. 作文中不得提及考生所在學校和本人姓名。

參考詞匯： 高考本科分數線  the required score in gaokao

In June, 2009, the Education Department of Jiangsu Province made a decision that giving lessons during the summer vacation and weekends should be banned.

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Answer 1

【答案】

In June, 2009, the Education Department of Jiangsu Province made a decision that giving lessons during the summer vacation and weekends should be banned.

I think it quite correct. This is an important measure for the quality-oriented education. As is well known to all, in order to raise the number of students to meet the required score in gaokao, almost all high schools gave lessons during the holidays. We students suffered a lot both physically and mentally.

However, my parents felt worried, and they complained, “Now that the present system of the college entrance exam hasn’t changed, can you cope with the fierce competition without extra lessons and enough exercise?”

Believe it or not, no summer vacation has been so meaningful to me as that of this year. Every day, I spent several hours going over my lessons. I also had time to relax and enjoy my hobbies. I went swimming, watched interesting programs on TV, did some reading and met my friends. In addition, I participated in community work and this has raised my awareness of public service. I really enjoyed my vacation.

【解析】本文是關于江蘇省的五嚴規定中嚴禁中小學周末補課的規定的討論，首先說出你自己的看法，你應該對這一規定表示歡迎，認為這樣做對學生是有好處的，讓學生有更多的空閑時間，發展其它方面的興趣愛好。家人對此的看法，你可以說家人對此也很歡迎，認為這樣做的對的。暑期的安排中要多樣化，學習，鍛煉，都應該有所涉及。在寫作時要使用合適的連接詞，讓文章更有條理，也要使用高級詞匯和高級句型，讓文章更有文采。