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8．假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處．每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改．增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（^），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．刪除：把多余的詞用（\）劃掉．修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．注意：（1）每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
（2）只允許修改l0處，多者（從第11處起）不計分．
I am very happy that you are interested in the protection of antelopes in China，
so I'd like to tell you everything about it．
In the past，some people kill antelopes for their free fur which can be made into many beautiful things that are very expensive．As the result，the number of antelopes was decreasing day by day．Now things are begun to change．The government and the local people take powerful measures to protect antelopes so that they will not die in the future．They had taken many effective measures，such as making strict laws to protecting antelopes，setting up several reserves for the antelopes，and so on．Of course，it's strong prohibited to buy or sell anything made of antelopes fur．
Nowadays，to our joy，there are much more and more antelopes in China．What's more，their living conditions have greatly improved．

Answer 1

分析 本段文字講述了關于羚羊保護的情況．過去很多人殺死羚羊利用它的毛皮來獲取利潤，結果導致羚羊的數量日漸減少．現在政府以及當地群眾開始采取強有力的措施保護羚羊，他們采取已經采取了很多有效措施，像制定嚴格的法律，建立羚羊自然保護區等，當然還強烈禁止買賣任何羚羊毛皮制品．如今讓我們高興的是，在中國羚羊的數量越來越多，而且羚羊的生存條件也得到了大大的改善．

解答 I am very happy that you are interested in the protection of antelopes in China，so I'd like to tell you everything about it．In the past，some people kill antelopes for
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their free fur which can be made into many beautiful things that are very expensive．As the result，the number of antelopes was decreasing day by day．Now things are
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begun to change．The government and the local people take powerful measures to protect antelopes so that they will not die∧in the future．They had taken many effecti
beginning                                                                                                                                                                      out                           have
ve measures，such as making strict laws to protecting antelopes，settingup several reserves for the antelopes，and so on．Of course，it's strong prohibited to buy or
                                                                protect                                                                                                                               strongly
sell anything made of antelopes fur．
                                antelope
Nowadays，to our joy，there are much more and more antelopes in China．What's more，their living conditions have greatly improved．
                                             去掉 much
1．everything改為something；考查不定代詞，根據語境，應該是"關于羚羊保護的一些事情"，而不是"每一件事情"，所以用everything．
2．kill改為killed；考查時態，根據前面的時間狀語"In the past"得知這里要用過去時態，所以改為killed．
3．the改為a；考查冠詞的用法，as a result 是一個固定搭配，意為"結果是"．
4．begun改為beginning；考查句子的時態，時間狀語是now，所以句子要用現在進行時．
5．die后面加上out；根據語境這句話的意思應該是"將來羚羊將會滅絕"，die out是固定搭配，"滅絕"的意思，所以在die后面加上out．
6．had改為have；考查時態，本文講述的是一個現實情況，用現在的某種時態，根據上下文語境，這里要用現在完成時．
7．protecting改為protect；考查動詞，不定時to后面跟動詞原形．
8．strong改為strongly；考查詞性，后面修飾的是動詞prohibited，所以要用副詞strongly．
9．antelopes改為antelope；考查名詞作定語，英語中的名詞單數可以作定語修飾名詞．
10．去掉much；考查形容詞，more and more意為"越來越多的"much在前面多余，所以去掉．

點評 短文改錯首先要從整體上把握短文的中心思想，了解短文的基本時態，再從細節上分析句子成分，運用詞匯，語法，時態等基本知識找出文中的錯誤加以修改．