Question

20．假設你是某中學的學生李津．你校英語俱樂部將選舉新一屆副主席，你欲參選，必須寫一篇演講稿．
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請按以下提示，寫一篇競選演講稿．

競選職位：學校英語俱樂部副主席 個人優勢：（1）性格外向、與人相處融洽 （2）善于組織各種活動 中選后決心：協助主席，服務同學 中選后設想：舉辦講座、英語晚會、英語演講比賽等活動來提高同學英語水平，激發學習興趣 表達愿望：希望同學們投票選你，相信你能干好工作

參考詞匯：副主席vice president　競選run for
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1．只能使用5個句子表達全部內容．
2．短文的開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總句數．
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句子結構準確，信息內容完整，篇章連貫．
Good afternoon，my dear friends，
My name is Li Jin．
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Thank you．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱作文．根據所提供的材料信息，寫一篇演講稿，參選校英語俱樂部新一屆副主席的選舉．
寫作時人稱以第一人稱和第三人稱為主，時態以一般現在時為主．
寫作要點：1．競選職位； 2．個人優勢；3．中選后決心；4．中選后設想；5．表達愿望．
重要短語：have the chance to do sth （有機會做某事），run for （參加的…競選），be qualified for（能勝任…），get on well with（與…相處愉快），be skilled at（擅長于），try one's best to（努力做某事），assist sb （幫助某人），serve sb （為某人服務），intend to do（打算做某事），in order to do（為了做某事），such as（例如）．
【高分句型一】
1．①Concerning this position，I feel qualified for the job②because I am outgoing，getting on well with others，and skilled at organizing all kinds of activities．
①此處是介詞短語"concerning this position"作狀語，主句為"I feel qualified for the job because I am outgoing，getting on well with others，and skilled at organizing all kinds of activities"．
②此處是由連詞"because"引導的原因狀語從句．
【高分句型二】
2．If I am lucky enough to be the vice president，I will try my best to assist the president and serve my fellow students．
此處是連詞"if"引導的條件狀語從句，主句為"I will try my best to assist the president and serve my fellow students"．
【高分句型三】
3．In order to improve our English and make more students interested in English，I intend to organize some activities such as lectures，English parties，English speech contests and so on．
此處是由介詞短語"in order to+動詞詞組"作目的狀語，主句為"I intend to organize some activities such as lectures，English parties，English speech contests and so on"．

解答 My name is Li Jin．Today I am very glad to have the chance to run for the vice president of the English Club．（競選職位） Concerning this position，I feel qualified for the job because I am outgoing，getting on well with others，and skilled at organizing all kinds of activities．【高分句型一】（個人優勢）If I am lucky enough to be the vice president，I will try my best to assist the president and serve my fellow students．【高分句型二】（中選后決心）In order to improve our English and make more students interested in English，I intend to organize some activities such as lectures，English parties，English speech contests and so on．【高分句型三】（中選后設想）I sincerely hope you will vote for me and please believe that I will be a good vice president．（表達愿望）

點評 提綱作文在寫作時要注意內容是否包含了所有要點．寫作時注意準確運用時態，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時需注意積累短語和重要句型．