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16．已去，勞動節將至．假設你是李華，請你以"過綠色節日"為主題，并根據下面所給出的要點提示，用英語給高一學生寫一封倡議書．
要點提示：
1．少放或不放煙花爆竹及其理由；
2．出游、訪友盡量不開車及其理由；
3．減少購物和盛宴，過節儉節日；
4．志愿撿垃圾，幫助清潔工人減輕負擔．
注意：
1．詞數100左右；
2．可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；
3．參考詞匯：煙花爆竹fireworks盛宴feast節儉的economical志愿做volunteer to do清潔工人dustman減輕負擔ease burden
Dear fellow students，
I am Li Hua．Since the Labor Day is approaching，I'm writing tocall on Senior One students in our school to have a"green"festival．
First of all，spectacular though fireworks are，we should stop or limit their use．（高分句型一）Fireworks shows not only produce harmful gases，but also claim many lives every year．（高分句型二）Secondly，in order to save energy and reduce the emission of carbon dioxide，we'd better give up driving cars when going out or visiting our friends．In addition，it is also advisable to minimize our spending on shopping and feasts．Finally，we may volunteer to pick up rubbish in the streets，easing the burden of dustmen so that they have a more relaxing holiday．（高分句型三）
Dear friends，let's work together to make the May Day celebration economical and environmentally friendly．．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據提示信息假設你是李華，請你以"過綠色節日"為主題，并根據下面所給出的要點提示，用英語給高一學生寫一封倡議書，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點包括：少放或不放煙花爆竹及其理由；出游、訪友盡量不開車及其理由；減少購物和盛宴，過節儉節日；志愿撿垃圾，幫助清潔工人減輕負擔．2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內進行分析、構思和想象．要依據提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序寫．3、根據要表達的內容確定句子的時態、語態．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：call on呼吁，號召；First of all首先；not only，but also不僅，而且Secondly其次；Finally最后；give up放棄；
First of all，spectacular though fireworks are，we should stop or limit their use．（高分句型一）
Fireworks shows not only produce harmful gases，but also claim many lives every year．（高分句型二）
Finally，we may volunteer to pick up rubbish in the streets，easing the burden of dustmen so that they have a more relaxing holiday．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear fellow students，
       I am Li Hua．Since the Labor Day is approaching，I'm writing to call on Senior One students in our school to have a"green"festival．
       First of all，spectacular though fireworks are，we should stop or limit their use．（高分句型一）Fireworks shows not only produce harmful gases，but also claim many lives every year．（高分句型二）Secondly，in order to save energy and reduce the emission of carbon dioxide，we'd better give up driving cars when going out or visiting our friends．In addition，it is also advisable to minimize our spending on shopping and feasts．Finally，we may volunteer to pick up rubbish in the streets，easing the burden of dustmen so that they have a more relaxing holiday．（高分句型三）
       Dear friends，let's work together to make the May Day celebration economical and environmentally friendly．

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．