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12．某個省份高考狀元的筆記本被冠以"狀元筆記"在網上高價出售，你班對該現象進行了辯論．請你根據以下辯論結果寫一篇100詞左右英語短文．要點如下：

贊同及理由	1．"狀元筆記"具有參考價值，便于購買者取長補短，提高學習成績； 2．利于環保．
反對及理由	1．他人的學習筆記未必適合自己； 2．自己做筆記記得更牢．
你的觀點

注意：1．可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫．
2．參考詞匯：（1）辯論debate v．；   （2）環境保護的 environmentally friendly adj．
（3）狀元筆記  the notebooks of top students in the Gaokao
（4）高價at a high price online．
The notebooks of top students in the Gaokao are sold out at a high price online．Our class had a debate on it．Students hold different views．
Some students are in favor of buying them online．They think top students'notebooks are worth reading and can save them much time．（高分句型一）Besides，they can make full use of the notes to improve their learning．（高分句型二）In addition，reusing notebooks is also environmentally friendly．However，others don't agree．They think top students'notebooks are not necessarily suitable for everybody else．What's more，students can remember what teachers explain in class better if they take notes themselves．（高分句型三）
Personally，I insisted on taking notes myself and not buying others．．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于圖表類作文，根據提示信息個省份高考狀元的筆記本被冠以"狀元筆記"在網上高價出售，你班對該現象進行了辯論．請你根據以下辯論結果寫一篇100詞左右英語短文，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點包括：贊同及理由和反對及理由及自己觀點2、圖表是文章的總體框架，要在圖表的范圍內進行分析、構思和想象．要依據提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序寫．3、根據要表達的內容確定句子的時態、語態．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：at a high price 以很高的價格；in favor of 支持；Besides另外；make full use of 充分利用；In addition另外；However然而；What's more而且；insist on堅持
They think top students'notebooks are worth reading and can save them much time．（高分句型一）
Besides，they can make full use of the notes to improve their learning．（高分句型二）
What's more，students can remember what teachers explain in class better if they take notes themselves．（高分句型三）

解答 The notebooks of top students in the Gaokao are sold out at a high price online．Our class had a debate on it．Students hold different views．
       Some students are in favor of buying them online．They think top students'notebooks are worth reading and can save them much time．（高分句型一）Besides，they can make full use of the notes to improve their learning．（高分句型二）In addition，reusing notebooks is also environmentally friendly．However，others don't agree．They think top students'notebooks are not necessarily suitable for everybody else．What's more，students can remember what teachers explain in class better if they take notes themselves．（高分句型三）
       Personally，I insisted on taking notes myself and not buying others．

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．