Question

假設(shè)你叫李華。你所在的城市要為明年暑假招聘英語導(dǎo)游，你打算應(yīng)聘。請 根據(jù)下列提示，用英語準(zhǔn)備一份面試稿。

  1.愛好英語，口語熟練，經(jīng)常與外國網(wǎng)友（net-pel)進(jìn)行語音聊天；

  2.性格開朗，思維敏捷，善于與人溝通；

  3.本地人，熟悉所在城市歷史與文化。

  注意：

  1.字?jǐn)?shù)：100-120；

  2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以便行文連貫；

  3.開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

  Hello!

  My name is Li Hua . It's a great honor to be here to have this interview for an English guide in the summer vacation.

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Thank you.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Hello!

My name is Li Hua. It’s a great honor to be here to have this interview for an English guide in the summer vacation.

To begin with, as a senior high student, I’m crazy about English and can speak it fluently. I’m used to practicing speaking English in everyday life. For example, I often voice chat with some English net-pels in my spare time, which really contributes to my fluency in oral English. Besides, I’m open-minded, quick in thought and very fond of social practice, which I think is a quality that a good guide should have. Above all, as a native of the city, I know a lot about its history and culture. So I’m sure that the foreigners will appreciate my work and enjoy their stay in our city.

If I am given the chance to be a guide, I’ll spare no effort to do it well. In a word, I’m looking forward to it.

Thank you.

 

【解析】

試題分析：本文是一篇給材料作文，或者說半開放作文，寫一份面試稿，實(shí)際上就是寫一封信。你打算應(yīng)聘你所在的城市要為明年暑假招聘英語導(dǎo)游，要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)給出1.愛好英語，口語熟練，經(jīng)常與外國網(wǎng)友（net-pel)進(jìn)行語音聊天；2.性格開朗，思維敏捷，善于與人溝通；3.本地人，熟悉所在城市歷史與文化和具體要求。在行文中，我們可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。范文中就使用了合理的連詞和較高級的語法結(jié)構(gòu)，使文章結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，增色不少。

【寫作亮點(diǎn)】：For example, I often voice chat with some English net-pels in my spare time, which really contributes to my fluency in oral English. Besides, I’m open-minded, quick in thought and very fond of social practice, which I think is a quality that a good guide should have. 這兩句， Besides表并列，前后兩個句子都使用了定語從句。定語從句的使用不僅嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)?shù)谋磉_(dá)完整意思，又使文章渾然一體。同時文章中使用了適當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，比如：To begin with，Besides，Above all,等，使用文章結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，渾然一體。

 

考點(diǎn)：考查閱讀和運(yùn)用語言的能力。

點(diǎn)評：書面表達(dá)中的寫信類作文，我們首先要完整的正確的表達(dá)出所有的寫作要點(diǎn)。在寫作中，如果語言基礎(chǔ)好的話，多用較高級語法結(jié)構(gòu)，這樣可以使文章增色不少。同時要合理的使用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，這樣文章才能結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，渾然一體。