Question

英語課上,老師要求同桌同學相互修改作文。假設以下短文為你同桌所寫，請你對其進行修改。文中共有10處錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號∧，并在此符號下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線＼劃掉。

修改：在錯詞下面劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1、每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2、只允許修改10處，多者從第11處不計分。

Dear Joe,

Thanks for you mail. I’m glad to know you are interested in the 2014 Florida Winter Camp. It will be held from January 27 to February 13, during that time you will get wonderful experience. You will have chances to improve your speaking English in the courses providing. Also, activities arranged for you to spend weekends together with your host family, so you can learn American English in authentic situations. However, a trip to the local Disneyland will certainly add up the fun of the camp.

Join in the camp and you will have the better knowledge of American culture and life. You are sure to benefit from it.

                                                          Yours truly

                                                               Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Dear Joe,

Thanks for you mail. I’m glad to know you are interested in the 2014 Florida Winter Camp. It will

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be held from January 27 to February 13, during that time you will get ∧wonderful experience. You will

which              a  或 experiences

have chances to improve your speaking English in the courses providing. Also, activities ∧arranged for

spoken                    provided              are

you to spend weekends together with your host family, so you can learn American English in authentic

situations. However, a trip to the local Disneyland will certainly add up the fun of the camp.

     Besides/Also/ Moreover                               to

Join in the camp and you will have the better knowledge of American culture and life. You are sure

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to benefit from it.                                                        

 Yours truly

                                                                Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：

 人稱代詞用法錯誤。名詞前應當用人稱代詞的所有格形式

 關系詞用法錯誤。定語從句中，介詞后只可接which。

 名詞用法錯誤。experience作為“經(jīng)驗”講為可數(shù)名詞。故需要加冠詞或加復數(shù)形式。

 形容詞用法錯誤。英語口語應當表達為spoken English。

 分詞用法錯誤。provide和所修飾名詞courses之間為被動關系，故用過去分詞。

 語態(tài)錯誤。這里應當用被動語態(tài)，故需要加上are。

 連詞用法錯誤。這里前后句為遞進關系，故用Besides/Also/ Moreover Besides/Also/ Moreover。

 And-but when we got there  連詞用法錯誤。前后句應當是轉(zhuǎn)折關系，故用but。

 短語用法錯誤。add to增加，增添。

 冠詞用法錯誤。knowledge本身為不可數(shù)名詞，但前有形容詞修飾需要用冠詞a。

考點：考查詞匯和語法的用法