Question

你叫李華。最近, 你們班同學就“地球一小時”（Earth Hour）活動展開了一場熱烈的討論。下表是這次討論的結果。請你用英語給《中學英語報》主編寫一封信, 介紹你們班的討論結果并闡明你自己的觀點。

60％的同學支持	40％的同學反對	你的看法
引起人們對全球氣候變暖的關注	做秀, 意義不大	……
節約能源	收效甚微
全世界共同努力, 保護地球	給人們生活, 學習和工作帶來不便
……	……

注意： 1.字數120左右      2.開頭結果已給出,不計人總詞數。

參考詞匯：做秀show 不便inconvenience

Dear Editor,

Last week our class had a heated discussion on Earth Hour.  ____                  

___________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Last week our class had a heated discussion on Earth Hour. Different students have different opinions about this activity．

About 60% of the students are in favor of it. As we all know, global warming is a big problem in the world. Earth Hour can raise people’s awareness of global warming. Besides, turning off lights for an hour is energy-saving. Only by working together can we make our earth a better place to live in.

However, about 40% of the students say this activity is not very meaningful. They think it is only a show and that it doesn’t make much difference. What’s more, turning off lights for an hour may cause inconvenience to people’s life, work and study.

In my opinion, this activity is of great importance. But one activity alone is not enough if we want to save energy and protect our earth. Let’s act through our day-to-day habits.

【解析】

試題分析：本文屬于正反觀點類的議論文，討論的話題是“地球一小時”；要求同學們就此觀點做出自己的選擇并說明理由，本作文中給出的要點比較具體,故需要準確表達.寫作時注意準確運用時態，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化。

考點：考查正反觀點類議論文

點評：本文題型是考生分詞熟悉的正反觀點類的議論文，在平時的練習中也有相應的模板。審題時注意本文使用一般現在時，人稱以第三人稱為主，發表個人意見時使用第一人稱。本文的要點均已給出，考生需要使用合適的連接詞把孤立的要點聯系成文。如for one thing, for another; besides, firstly, secondly, last but not least等。也要使用一些高級的詞匯詞組如 be supposed to do sth, benefit 等以提升文章的檔次分。在文章紅可以適當使用一至兩句諺語如：Every coin has two sides等可以大大提高文章的文采，提高獲得高分的可能性。