Question

10．假設你是李津，最近在你班的班會上進行了一次有關是在國外讀大學還是在國內讀大學的討論會，請根據以下提示寫一篇英文短文為校報投稿

在國外上大學	在國內上大學
優勢：學校知名度高、注重實踐、環境優雅	優勢：優秀的教師團隊、設備先進、學費較低
不足：費用高	不足：實踐的機會不多
你的觀點及選擇

注意：
1．字數120；
2．要點要全；開頭和結尾已經寫出，不計入總詞數；
3．可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫．
Dear Editor of the school newspaper，
I contribute to your newspaper to introduce something about the recent class meeting of mine．
Our class has held a heated debate about whether going abroad or staying at home for college education recently．
Some students think that studying abroad is a good choice because there are lots of famous colleges abroad．The environment there is nice and quiet．But the expense of studying abroad is rather high．Others prefer to study home．They believe that domestic colleges have excellent teams of teachers，the teaching equipment is advanced，and the tuition is lower．However，chances to practice are not as many as studying abroad．
As far as I am concerned，I choose domestic colleges．Although the domestic university may not be as good as the foreign university，culture difference is a big problem．To study abroad，you must get over the obstacle of language and differences in behavior and habits．
Yours，
Li Jin．

Answer 1

分析 本文是"表格+提綱類"形式，根據文章圖表和所給提示信息寫一篇短文，介紹就"是在國外讀大學還是在國內讀大學"這一問題的討論形成的不同觀點和看法．
寫作要點：1．開頭-引出話題；2．贊成在國外上大學觀點及依據；3．贊成在國內上大學觀點及依據；4．自己的觀點．
寫作時時態以一般現在時為主．人稱以第一和第三人稱為主．
重要短語：hold a heated debate（進行一個熱烈的討論），go abroad（出國），prefer to（更喜歡），domestic colleges（國內大學），as far as sb be concerned（就某人所關注的而言），get over sth（克服某事），the obstacle of（…的障礙），the expense of （…的費用），be advanced（先進的），the chances to do sth（做某事的機會）．
【高分句型一】
1．Our class has held a heated debate about whether going abroad or staying at home for college education recently．
此處是連接詞"whether"引導的賓語從句，主句為"Our class has held a heated debate"．
【高分句型二】
2．Some students think①that ②studying abroad is a good choice because there are lots of famous colleges abroad．
①此處是由連接詞"that"引導的賓語從句，主句為"Some students think"．
 ②此處為動名詞作主語，謂語動詞用單數形式．
【高分句型三】
3．Although the domestic university may not be as good as the foreign university，culture difference is a big problem．
此處是由連詞"although"引導的讓步狀語從句，主句為"culture difference is a big problem"．
【高分句型四】
4．To study abroad，you must get over the obstacle of language and differences in behavior and habits．
  此處是由不定式短語"To study abroad"作目的狀語，主句為"you must get over the obstacle of language and differences in behavior and habits"．

解答 Dear Editor of the school newspaper，
I contribute to your newspaper to introduce something about the recent class meeting of mine．
    Our class has held a heated debate about whether going abroad or staying at home for college education recently．【高分句型一】（開頭-引出話題）
    Some students think that studying abroad is a good choice because there are lots of famous colleges abroad．【高分句型二】The environment there is nice and quiet．But the expense of studying abroad is rather high．Others prefer to study home．They believe that domestic colleges have excellent teams of teachers，the teaching equipment is advanced，and the tuition is lower．However，chances to practice are not as many as studying abroad．（正反雙方論述各自的利弊）
    As far as I am concerned，I choose domestic colleges．Although the domestic university may not be as good as the foreign university，culture difference is a big problem．【高分句型三】To study abroad，you must get over the obstacle of language and differences in behavior and habits．【高分句型四】（自己觀點）
Yours，
Li Jin．

點評 寫好這類圖片及提綱式作文的關鍵是認真分析所給提示信息，靈活運用英語知識，采用不同的表達方式將要點完整地表述出來，并認真看圖，圍繞主題，提煉要點，發揮想象，語言力求準確、簡潔．選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性．同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，最后還要認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等．