Question

假如你是高三學生李華，你的英國筆友Tracy在郵件中講述了她的新年意愿，你很受鼓舞。請用英語回復Tracy，交流分享一下你的新年打算。內容主要包括：

●改進學習方法

●加強體育鍛煉

●考后旅游放松

參考詞匯：新年意愿：New Year’s Resolution

注意：

(1)詞數(shù)不少于80；

(2)請在答題卡上作答；

(3)開頭語與結束語已為你寫好（不計入總詞數(shù)）。

Dear Tracy,

I was so glad to get your e-mail and greatly encouraged by your New Year’s Resolution. _________________________________________________________________________

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Tracy,

I was so glad to get your e-mail and greatly encouraged by your New Year’s Resolution. Now I’d like to share mine with you.

As a Senior Three student, finding an effective learning method is of vital importance to improve my study. Therefore, in the coming year, I’ll focus on adopting a better learning method to get better grades. Besides, I know my goals can’t be realized without good health, so I’ve decided to spend at least half an hour each day exercising, which will surely help me keep fit. Moreover, I plan to relax myself by traveling after the exam. Could you recommend a good place to me?

Best wishes.

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇敘述性地記敘文寫作。依據(jù)所提供的信息，以提綱中的三點內容為主，清晰表達，并且要不失亮點，準確把握英文句子的書寫，避免出現(xiàn)漢語式英語的現(xiàn)象。要求：根據(jù)提示書寫，詞數(shù)不少于80，開頭語與結束語已為你寫好。

【亮點說明】范文共三段，開頭直接表明自己也要跟對方分享新年意愿，范文雖然結構簡單，但是層次清晰，其中也用了一些高級的句型，使得文章水平在一個高的層面，如: I know my goals can’t be realized without good health,.等賓語從句，還有非限制性定語從句so I’ve decided to spend at least half an hour each day exercising, which will surely help me keep fit.；最后的疑問句Could you recommend a good place to me?婉轉的說法，使得文章讀起來更加通暢。還采用了一些比較好的短語，focus on集中于，decide to決定做，spend的用法，有條有理，避免文章比較單一，簡單無味；同樣有一些好的銜接詞，使得文章讀起來通順，有序Therefore，Besides，Moreover，. 這些都給文章帶來了亮點。還要注意的是最后闡述自己觀點時，要觀點明確，不可含糊。

考點：考查應用文寫作。