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2．每位同學都希望自己具有良好的人際關系，成為班級中受歡迎的人．請你根據下表所提供有信息，寫一篇題為"Being a Popular Student"的英語短文，參加學校網站英語論壇的討論．

受人喜愛的個性品質	對待集體	熱心班級活動，具有團隊精神，工作負責
	對待他人	尊重、關心他人，富有同情心，…
	對待自己	（考生自己擬定內容，列舉至少兩點）…

注意：1．短文必須包括所有內容要點，可適當發揮；
　　　2．短文標題已為你寫好，不計入總詞數；
　　　3．詞數：150左右．
Being a Popular Student
We all hope to be popular with our classmates and teachers．To enjoy popularity，we are supposed to regard the class as our big family and try our best to take an active part in all our class activities．（高分句型一）We should be responsible for the work and keep teamwork spirit in mind．
To be a popular student，we must show our respect，concern and sympathy for others．As a result，we never hesitate to lend a hand to those in need．
To be a popular student，we ought to be strict with ourselves in everything we do at school and make an effort to achieve all-round development，being good not only at our lessons but also at sports，music，painting，social services and so on．（高分句型二）In time of success we remain modest，while in time of difficulty we keep strong-minded．
All in all，being a popular student among the classmates and teachers comes naturally to those who keep improving their personal qualities．（高分句型三）．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達是要求寫一篇題目為"Being a popular student"的討論稿．寫作內容貼近學生生活，也反映了每個同學的內心愿望，所以同學們寫起來應該是得心應手．但是寫作時要注意以下幾個方面：一 文章要點較多，注意不要遺漏要點．二 從段落安排上可以把要求的三個方面分三段來寫，恰當使用關聯詞，使文章層次分明，條理清楚．三 寫作時注意恰當地使用名詞，代詞單復數形式和標點符號，以免給人內容含混不清的感覺．四 文章內容屬于發表個人觀點，看法，所以可以用一般現在時態．
【亮點說明】本文在語言表達上清晰流暢，而且要點全面．在段落安排上用三個不定式短語分別引出對集體，對他人，對自己三個方面，使文章層次分明，條理清晰．此外連接詞的恰當使用也是本文的一大亮點，比如：not only…but also，while in time of difficulty；all in all，as a result 等．不僅如此，文中出現的大量短語be popular with，take an active part in，regard..as，make an effort to，In time of success，lend a hand to sb不僅反映出作者詞匯的豐富，而且也使文章更加簡潔明了，清晰易懂．總之這是一篇優秀的范文．
To enjoy popularity，we are supposed to regard the class as our big family and try our best to take an active part in all our class activities．（高分句型一）
  To be a popular student，we ought to be strict with ourselves in everything we do at school and make an effort to achieve all-round development，being good not only at our lessons but also at sports，music，painting，social services and so on．（高分句型二）
All in all，being a popular student among the classmates and teachers comes naturally to those who keep improving their personal qualities．（高分句型三）

解答 Being a Popular Student
       We all hope to be popular with our classmates and teachers．To enjoy popularity，we are supposed to regard the class as our big family and try our best to take an active part in all our class activities．（高分句型一）We should be responsible for the work and keep teamwork spirit in mind．
       To be a popular student，we must show our respect，concern and sympathy for others．As a result，we never hesitate to lend a hand to those in need．
       To be a popular student，we ought to be strict with ourselves in everything we do at school and make an effort to achieve all-round development，being good not only at our lessons but also at sports，music，painting，social services and so on．（高分句型二）In time of success we remain modest，while in time of difficulty we keep strong-minded．
       All in all，being a popular student among the classmates and teachers comes naturally to those who keep improving their personal qualities．（高分句型三）

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．