Question

3．你是李華，端午節期間 （the Dragon Boat Festival/Duanwu festtival）你的一個朋友Smith準備到你所在的城市來旅游，但你有事不能接機，寫封信給他．
內容包括以下要點：
1．解釋你不能接機的原因
2．并說明端午節期間的安排．
注意：1．詞數100左右；
2．可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；
3．你可能用到的詞匯 （Zongzi，the Dragon Boat Races）
Dear Smith，
　　I'm glad to know that you are coming to my city during the Dragon Boat Festival．
　　However，I'm afraid there's some bad news．I'm planning to take part in an international conference to be held in another city during the time of your visit．All the top scientists in my field will show up at the conference．More importantly，I'm lucky enough to have been selected to give a speech on behalf of my research team at the Conference．I really can't miss it．
　　I understand that it'll be your first time to this city and I'm your only friend here．I've asked my roommate to meet you at the airport，and you can stay in my room．He is a very nice person and he willstay with youduring theFestival!At the same time，you'll taste the Chinese traditional food--Zongzi and watch the exciting race--theDragonBoatRaces．I'm sure you will have a good time．
Yours，
　 　 Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據提示信息端午節期間 （the Dragon Boat Festival/Duanwu festtival）你的一個朋友Smith準備到你所在的城市來旅游，但你有事不能接機，寫封信給他，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個要點：解釋你不能接機的原因；并說明端午節期間的安排 2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內進行分析、構思和想象．要依據提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序寫．3、根據要表達的內容確定句子的時態、語態；就本文而言應該用一般現在時態．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：However然而；take part in參加；show up出現，現身；More importantly更重要的是；give a speech做演講；have a good time過得愉快；
I'm planning to take part in an international conference to be held in another city during the time of your visit．（高分句型一）
More importantly，I'm lucky enough to have been selected to give a speech on behalf of my research team at the Conference．（高分句型二）
At the same time，you'll taste the Chinese traditional food--Zongzi and watch the exciting race--the Dragon Boat Races．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Smith，
　　I'm glad to know that you are coming to my city during the Dragon Boat Festival．
　　However，I'm afraid there's some bad news．I'm planning to take part in an international conference to be held in another city during the time of your visit．（高分句型一）All the top scientists in my field will show up at the conference．More importantly，I'm lucky enough to have been selected to give a speech on behalf of my research team at the Conference．（高分句型二）I really can't miss it．（解釋你不能接機的原因）
　　I understand that it'll be your first time to this city and I'm your only friend here．I've asked my roommate to meet you at the airport，and you can stay in my room．He is a very nice person and he will stay with you during the Festival!At the same time，you'll taste the Chinese traditional food--Zongzi and watch the exciting race--the Dragon Boat Races．（高分句型三）  I'm sure you will have a good time．（端午節期間的安排）
                                                                                                                                                                                                                    Yours，
　　                                                                                                                                                                                                              Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．