Question

閱讀下面短文，然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。

Responsibility is one of the most treasured traditional values in China. The children are taught to be responsible when they are very young. At schools, the students are also instructed to be responsible.

In fact, responsibility can be understood in many ways. For parents, they have had the responsibility for caring for and fostering their children since the birth of their babies; for teachers, both in kindergartens and colleges, they also should be responsible for the study and life of their students, that is to say, teachers are the second parents of children to some extent; for us, to promote a better relationship with our friends, we bear the responsibility for helping our friends when they are in trouble or faced with difficulties.

【寫作內容】1. 以約30個詞概括上文的主要內容。

2. 以約120個詞就“責任心”談談你的認識，內容包括：

(1) 責任心的重要性，并舉例說明缺乏責任心的影響。

(2) 你認為該如何做一個有責任心的中學生？

注意：1. 可以用自己親身的經歷、虛構的故事或生活中的事例，也可以參照閱讀材料的內容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。

2. 作文中不得提及考生所在學校和本人姓名。

Answer 1

The passage mainly tells us that we Chinese put high value on responsibility and that people have different responsibility depending on their roles.

Responsibility is essential to our life. Being responsible, you will gain many precious things, such as true love. Without responsibility, however, you’ll be an annoyance and can’t achieve what you desire. For example, some students don’t work hard or even skip classes. Worse still, some are so weak in controlling themselves that they are often addicted to the Internet, which has negative effects on their study.

As students, we ought to be responsible for whatever we do. Above all, great efforts should be made to improve our study and repay the love and care of our parents and teachers. Besides, we must develop a strong sense of responsibility, such as helping others in trouble. Only when we are responsible will we be respected and loved by others.

【解析】

試題分析：本文為讀寫任務型作文，提供英文閱讀材料。考生在寫作之前必修認真審題，首先要對所給的材料進行歸納，要注意歸納文章的時態和人稱以及30字左右的字數要求。接著第二部分的120字左右要求里，要對材料的“責任心”主題從其重要性以及缺乏責任心所產生的影響兩方面進行闡述，最后結合自身闡述如何做一有責任心的中學生。整篇文章對學生的語言表達有一定的能力要求。

【亮點說明】文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，首先在概括上語言精練，言簡意賅使用了賓語從句的并列表達等復合從句的表達等，如：you’ll be an annoyance and can’t achieve what you desire；此外還運用了Being responsible, you will gain many precious things等非謂語動詞結構以及which引導的非限制性定語從句等等。并注意了句子的銜接如：however，Worse still ，Besides， Above all 等等。

考點：讀寫任務型寫作