Question

IV 寫作(共2題，滿分40分)
第一節基礎寫作(共1題，滿分15分)
你的筆友William回復你的電子郵件告訴你英國高中生課余時間可以打工，其內容要點如下：

英國高中生	1. 可以打工，每天不超過三小時，晚上不得遲于七點； 2. 一星期18小時以內。
William的看法	1. 可獲得生活中一些技能，如填表、應對面試和與人相處； 2. 增強自信和獨立性，學會如何理財； 3. 有利學習和工作責任心。

[寫作內容]
假設你是李華，請根據以上信息，以William的口吻將這些信息轉寫成一封信，內容包括：
1. 英國15歲以上的高中生課余可以打工；
2. 高中生課余打工的時限規定；
3. 你(William)的看法。
[寫作要求]    
1.只能使用5個句子表達全部的內容；
2.開頭和結尾已寫出，不講入總句數。
[評分標準]    句子結構的準確性，信息內容的完整性、連貫。
Dear Li Hua,
Very glad to have received your email. Now I’ll tell you what I am doing during my unlimited time these days.
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Best wishes to you and looking forwards to your early reply.
Yours,
William Dickens

Answer 1

[one possible version]
Dear Li Hua,
Very glad to have received your email. Now I’ll tell you what I am doing during my unlimited time these days. In the UK, any secondary student over 15 years old can get a job legally in his unlimited time. Students, who can work as long as they work no more than three hours a day and 18 hours a week during the school year, can’t work past 7:00 pm during school year.
I guess, first of all, jobs can teach teenagers work skills they will need their whole lives, such as how to fill out an application, how to interview well and how to get along with co-workers and superiors. What’s more, jobs can help us teens not only feel more confident and independent but also develop a sense of responsibility for our courses and work. The most important of all, Jobs help us teens learn to manage our money in our life.
Best wishes to you and looking forwards to your early reply.
Yours,
William Dickens

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