Question

下文中共有10處語言錯誤，每行中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（√），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線＼劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

The American Civil War came to end in the year 1 86 5，which the Northernersbeat the Southerner．However，even today，many Southerners had not forgotten their defeat．Once some American tourists were visiting to the battle field of the Civil War with Stella，a woman guide from the South．She kept tell stories about how the Southern

soldiers had survived powerfully forces of the Northemer Finally，a tourist，who were from the North，stopped Stella and said，“And surely，the Northerners must have won at least one victory．"“Not as long as I'm the guide．”he answered.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

 end加an

 which改為when或者which 前加介詞in

 Southerner應用復數形式，在后面加s

 去掉visiting后的to

 had改為have

 tell改為telling

 powerfully改為powerful

 were改為was

 and改為but

 he改為she

【解析】

試題分析：

 The American Civil War came to end in the year 1 86 5，本句中to用作介詞，后面接名詞作賓語。End表示任何一個結果，泛指，故前面加不定冠詞。End詞首音素是元音，不定冠詞用an。短語come to an end結束。

 which the Northerners beat the Southerner．前文先行詞in the year 1 86 5，為下文從句

邏輯時間狀語，故引導詞用when或者which 前加介詞in。

 which the Northerners beat the Southerner．聯系前文which the Northerners可知此處的是南方人。結合語境可知Southerner應用復數形式，故在后面加s。

 此處visit是及物動詞，故其后直接接名詞作賓語，to是多余的。

 However，even today，many Southerners had not forgotten their[來defeat．聯系本句時間狀語even today，可知本句描述的是一直持續到現在的動作，故用現在完成時態。had改為have。

 She kept tell stories about……，短語keep doing sth繼續做某事，一直做某事。動名詞做賓語表示抽象的反復發生的動作。故將tell改為telling，講述。

 the Southern soldiers had survived powerfully forces of the Northamber Finally，本句中powerful用作定語修飾名詞forces，強大的軍隊。故將powerfully改為powerful。強大的。

 a tourist，who were from the North，本句中主語who表示單數含義，故謂語動詞用is的過去時態was，將were改為was。

 “And surely，the Northerners must have won at least one victory．聯系前文，可知此處表示轉折關系，and表示順接關系，故將and改為but，但是。

 “Not as long as I'm the guide．”he answered．聯系前文She kept tell stories描述，可知此處指的是這個女導游。故將he改為she。

考點：短文糾錯