Question

書面表達（滿分30分）

假定你是李華。請根據寫作要點用英語寫一篇周記，記述你周末幫助家人做家務的一次經歷。

寫作要點：1.做家務的理由；2.做家務的過程；3.你的感受。

注意：

1.短文詞數不少于100；

2.開頭部分已寫好，不計入總詞數；

3.不能使用真實姓名和學校名稱

 

Answer 1

【答案】

I am an 18-year old middle school student. I have been busy with my study and seldom helped my parents with the housework. Feeling quite sorry for that, I begin to think about what to do to help.

　　Last Sunday, when my parents went out shopping, I suddenly got an idea: why not give the rooms a thorough cleaning? Firstly I collected all the books, newspapers and other things scattered in the rooms and put them in place. Then I wiped the dust off all the furniture. After that, I swept and mopped the floors.

　　At this very moment, my parents came back and were quite surprised to see all the rooms tidy and floors shining. My mother gave me a hug and I could see satisfaction in her eyes. Tired as I was, I never felt so happy.

【解析】

試題分析：考查提綱類作文寫作，重點考查考生的書面表達的能力。做家務的話題應該是中學生熟悉，有話可寫的素材，因此難度并不大。題目以周記的形式展現，要求考生先介紹做家務的理由，再介紹做家務的過程，最后寫出自己的感受。考生在寫作時，一定要緊扣寫作要點進行寫作，三個要點都十分重要，如果考生能夠在緊扣寫作要點的基礎上，抓住語言的準確性，再寫出幾個亮點詞匯和句式，得到高分應該比較輕松。

【亮點說明】Feeling quite sorry for that, I begin to think about what to do to help.這句話是現在分詞做狀語， Last Sunday, when my parents went out shopping, I suddenly got an idea: why not give the rooms a thorough cleaning? 這句話用了同位語從句， I collected all the books, newspapers and other things scattered in the rooms and put them in place. 這句話里面用了詞組：put sth in place把…布置得井井有條， Tired as I was, I never felt so happy. 這句話用了倒裝句，還有文章用了Firstly， After that這樣的詞使文章更加連貫。

考點：考查提綱類短文