Question

2008年北京奧運會圓滿結束了，“與奧運冠軍共成長”已成為全國青年的熱門話題。請就下表中的內容寫一篇英語短文。

奧運冠軍的共同點	全力以赴，追求卓越； 尊重他人，遵守規則； 面對失敗，永不言棄
如何做生活中的冠軍	明確目標，奮勇向前 心態平和，誠信待人
你的觀點	------

注意：1. 對所給要點不要逐條翻譯，要有適當發揮；

       2. 詞數：100左右。短文開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數。

    Many achievements have been made in the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games, which makes all the Chinese excited. Now how to grow up along with Olympic champions has become a hot topic._______________________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

'Many achievements have been made in the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games, which makes all the Chinese excited. Now how to grow up along with Olympic champions has become a hot topic.

As we know, the Olympic champions have much in common. First, they go all out to be excellent. Second, they respect others and obey the rules strictly. Third, faced with one failure after another, they never give up.

How can we become a champion in real life? For one thing, we must set a clear goal, which will inspire us to pursue what we want to. For another, a good state of mind is one of key factors in success. Certainly, it’s very important for us to be sincere to others.

As middle school students, we must learn to deal with stress and build up self-confidence. Besides, we should treasure friendship and try to concentrate on our goals all the time.

解析:

本文要開門見山，首先點明主旨。可以應用一些比較復雜的句式，使文章比較出彩。文章句式精煉。用熟悉的句型、短語去表達。語言的組織和層次感很強。同時連詞的使用要注意，如not only, but also ,讓文章的重點突出，同時也起到了強調和吸引注意的目的。