Question

假如你是李華，于11月12日到達紐約，然后去找你的美國朋友Tom，但他不在家。請按以下內容給Tom留張便條。
火車晚點15分鐘，與接你的Tom錯過；
在火車上認識的定居美國的華人夫婦Taylor把你帶到Tom家，Tom不在；
現在Taylor夫婦家；
務必今晚打電話給你64611128.
注意：1.詞數100左右
2. 不要逐字翻譯，可適當增加細節以使行文連貫；
3. 信的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。
Dear Tom，
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Yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Tom,
I’m in New York! It’s a really a pity that I didn’t find you at the railway station. You may have left when my train arrived, a quarter behind the schedule.
Luckily, on the train I came across Mr. Taylor and his wife, who are Chinese and have been living in the US for several years. Seeing that there was no one to meet me at the station, they offered to drive me to your house.
As you happen to be out, I’ve decided to accept the Taylors’ offer to stay at their house for the night. I’ve decided to put up here for the night. They are very friendly to me , so don’t worry about me. I’ll be all right. It cannot be better if you can call me at my phone number 64611128 this evening.
Looking forward to meeting you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua

解析試題分析：這是一篇書信類作文，要點已經給出。我們所要做的就是按要點內容給Tom留張便條。注意題目的要求，寫作時注意準確運用時態，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，一定要把表格中的要點都寫出來，不要有遺漏。寫作時盡量使用自己不會的單詞、詞組和句型，同時也要注意使用一些高級語法和句型，使自己的文章更有文采。
考點：書信類作文
點評：本文屬于書信類作文，動筆前，一定要認真分析要點，理解要點要表達的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題。平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作聯系以外，還可以適當記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。