Question

第五部分：寫作(共兩節(jié)，滿分35分)

第一節(jié)：短文改錯(共10小題；每小題l分，滿分10分)

    文中共有10處錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

    增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號(∧)，并在此符號下面寫出該加的詞。

    刪詞：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

    修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：l、每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞：

      2、只允許修改l0處，多者(從第11處起)不計分           

People like swimming in the summer because water makes them to feel cool. However, these years many people died while they were enjoyed themselves in water, and some of them were students. So some people are still not carefully in swimming. They often think they swim such well that nothing will happen on them in water. On hot summer days, if you will go swimming, remember that many good swimmer have died in water. They died because they were not careful, so don’t get into water when you are lonely. If you remember this, swimming will be safer.

Answer 1

People like swimming in the summer because water makes them to feel

                    去掉                           去掉         

cool. However, these years many people died while they were enjoyed

                                                  enjoying          

themselves in water, and some of them were students. So some people are

                                            But         

still not carefully in swimming. They often think they swim such well that

       careful                                    so        

nothing will happen on them in water. On hot summer days, if you will go

                 to                                   去掉         

swimming, remember that many good swimmer have died in water. They

                               swimmers                          

died because they were not careful, so don’t get into water when you are lonely. If you remember

                                                          alone

this, swimming will be safer.